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第五集第三章哦，本章名为：水族故事
在这里确定下来了四神的英文名：
Arethusa：God of Water，水神
Vulcan：God of Fire，火神
Gnomia：God of Earth，土神
Aeolus, God of Wind.，风神
生命之源的英文名翻译为：Gaia（即盖亚，她是古希腊神话中的大母神，创造了原始神祇和宇宙万有的创造之母）

另外，四神的名字，由于很久之后才出现，本来想先行用在本章中的，所以也翻译了，但是后来发现不妥。
但还是发出来吧
Doris Irene水神
Lance Umar Mandala土神
Ruthn Marcus Rupert火神
Breznitz Boende Christo风神

V4篇外篇2 she took a deep breathe应为breath.

but that case...是buy the case吗？

Smuggling is much much lucrative than that 这里应该是much more吧？

The ones who have been standing beside me stepped ever so further.因为篇外篇用的是第三人称，所以stand beside Cohen比较好

v4篇外篇3 The day you sold me three piece of clothes，应该是3 pieces of clothes

You are gonna do do heavy labour every day! 两个do

v4篇外篇4 Ms. Merlin, no, she was not Mrs. Merlin，不是not是now

These days, he slept with his friends instead of came bothering you instead of后应该是doing

I said yesterday to smuggling spice, 是to smuggle吧

The days were joyful and fulfill,应该是fulfilling吧

Watched as he went down the stairs. Dior Merlin felt panic out of nowhere.应该是watching

Looked at the pile of leases and business papers he gave her: The clothes store that she had thrown in so much hard work and the property deeds of her house in the city… Her heart ached and nearly dropped in tears.在句首加个she比较好

v5c5 gave him a thumbs up,thumb多了个s