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我申请弗吉尼亚大学uva的命题论文写的是LOTR....

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其实题目是:
College of Arts and Sciences: What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way? (250 words)
我今年申请弗吉尼亚大学的本科。。。这个题目真是。。。不太好写。。。
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在下希望各位老资格的指环王迷(我知道这里有很多学术研究老托的牛人!!!)可以稍微给在下一些修改和意见,不胜感激!
   Facing the blank gate and confronting the mouth of Dark Lord Sauron , Lord Aragorn relentlessly led all the western soldiers to fight hundreds of thousands of Orcs from Mordor, clutching at the faith in the fellowship. Spontaneously on the serpentine road up to Mount Doom, Frodo and Sam were burning the last fuel of courage to climb the lava-scattered slope to destroy the one ring, not knowing that a battle between craving and responsibility was to come. Here in The Lord Of the Rings, besides fantastic magic, formidable creatures and mind-boggling wars, I see through all those characters the essence of humanity: the great fortitude to withstand fear, the mutual trust that energized mankind and the unfailingly persistent hymn to preserving the Earth. Every time I feel lost or puzzled by setbacks, I always turned to the trilogy to seek consolation and replenishment. I have been relishing the sense of fulfillment from the fellowship of the ring, internalizing the valor lingering amongst the heroes, and admiring the romantic love of Nature through the mighty force of Fangorn forest that destroyed the evil Isengard.
    Another tribute I write to The Lord Of The Rings is that it has advanced the progress of linguistics. Professor Tolkien based this grand myth not only on medieval English, but also several fictional languages he invented himself: Elves’ melancholy moans are sung in Quenya and Sindarin, the evil Orcs are basically roaring in the Black Speech, and the tavern-vagabonds are whistling nostalgic verses in Hobbitish. Partly through LORT I have learned that in Literature, men’s imaginations and creativity can be infinitely amplified with assiduousness and visionariness.



1楼2010-11-24 17:28回复
    膜拜楼主...表示看不懂.....


    IP属地:浙江2楼2010-11-24 17:33
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      2025-08-05 16:37:01
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      看了一遍,不认识的词直接跳过…lz写的挺好…
      我记得星大貌似说过lotr前面加不加the的问题(貌似是电影给加了,原著读的时候不加,不过我看的我存的这个封面上也有加),不过这也无碍什么……
      祝lz成功~


      4楼2010-11-24 17:53
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        写得挺好


        IP属地:安徽5楼2010-11-24 18:37
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          挺不错的,但为什麽你非要写这个话题?问问你,这样的题目你写中国的东西会有问题不?


          IP属地:四川6楼2010-11-24 18:52
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            @4l:到底加不加。。。。。。怨念。。。。
            @6: 因为我确实很喜欢。。。一直很喜欢。。。写中国的东西木有问题的,但是如果花太多笔墨解释介绍的话就有点挑战。


            7楼2010-11-24 19:04
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              个人意见
              在语言方面没得说
              在魔戒内涵上仁者见仁,智者见智


              8楼2010-11-24 19:07
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                另外,个人意见
                加吧


                9楼2010-11-24 19:09
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                  2025-08-05 16:31:01
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                  LZ也是申请本科吗?。。SAT和托福多少分啊?。。我也申请本科中。。。


                  10楼2010-11-24 19:19
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                    请LZ注意下错别字……


                    11楼2010-11-24 19:34
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                      楼主啊!!!
                      我也申了UVa~也是College of arts and science,一样的题,我写的也是一本书(或者说一篇文章)对我的影响。不过我没写LOTR~
                      我觉得最好强调一下LOTR对你的impact吧~
                      另外一篇ESSAY你选了哪个题?


                      12楼2010-11-24 22:12
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                        因为根本就不是加the的……


                        14楼2010-11-24 23:46
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                          我选了最后一个the dumbest generation...


                          15楼2010-11-25 00:29
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