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我申请弗吉尼亚大学uva的命题论文写的是LOTR....

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其实题目是:
College of Arts and Sciences: What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way? (250 words)
我今年申请弗吉尼亚大学的本科。。。这个题目真是。。。不太好写。。。
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在下希望各位老资格的指环王迷(我知道这里有很多学术研究老托的牛人!!!)可以稍微给在下一些修改和意见,不胜感激!
   Facing the blank gate and confronting the mouth of Dark Lord Sauron , Lord Aragorn relentlessly led all the western soldiers to fight hundreds of thousands of Orcs from Mordor, clutching at the faith in the fellowship. Spontaneously on the serpentine road up to Mount Doom, Frodo and Sam were burning the last fuel of courage to climb the lava-scattered slope to destroy the one ring, not knowing that a battle between craving and responsibility was to come. Here in The Lord Of the Rings, besides fantastic magic, formidable creatures and mind-boggling wars, I see through all those characters the essence of humanity: the great fortitude to withstand fear, the mutual trust that energized mankind and the unfailingly persistent hymn to preserving the Earth. Every time I feel lost or puzzled by setbacks, I always turned to the trilogy to seek consolation and replenishment. I have been relishing the sense of fulfillment from the fellowship of the ring, internalizing the valor lingering amongst the heroes, and admiring the romantic love of Nature through the mighty force of Fangorn forest that destroyed the evil Isengard.
    Another tribute I write to The Lord Of The Rings is that it has advanced the progress of linguistics. Professor Tolkien based this grand myth not only on medieval English, but also several fictional languages he invented himself: Elves’ melancholy moans are sung in Quenya and Sindarin, the evil Orcs are basically roaring in the Black Speech, and the tavern-vagabonds are whistling nostalgic verses in Hobbitish. Partly through LORT I have learned that in Literature, men’s imaginations and creativity can be infinitely amplified with assiduousness and visionariness.



1楼2010-11-24 17:28回复
    @4l:到底加不加。。。。。。怨念。。。。
    @6: 因为我确实很喜欢。。。一直很喜欢。。。写中国的东西木有问题的,但是如果花太多笔墨解释介绍的话就有点挑战。


    7楼2010-11-24 19:04
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      回复:12楼
      我选了最后一个the dumbest generation...


      15楼2010-11-25 00:29
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        回复:11楼
        错别字?


        16楼2010-11-25 00:30
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          回复:17楼
          我update之后把这个词删了。。。不过确实错了,嘿嘿,thanks!


          18楼2010-11-25 01:29
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            回复:19楼
            请继续。。。


            20楼2010-11-25 14:55
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              回复:25楼
              Thanks!!!!
              表示确实是申请论文不是考试~


              28楼2010-11-26 01:24
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                谢谢!


                29楼2010-11-26 01:25
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                  回复:30楼
                  but i know i'm a freak... and colleges only admit freaks anyway...


                  31楼2010-11-26 18:08
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                    回复:32楼
                    您具体一点吧。。。


                    33楼2010-11-26 18:13
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                      回复:34楼
                      people sees 有可能对啊


                      39楼2010-11-27 15:16
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                        回复:38楼
                        Z哥你好。。。你怎么找到的。。。


                        40楼2010-11-27 15:16
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                          回复:35楼
                          就是admit。。。


                          41楼2010-11-27 15:17
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                            回复:37楼
                            我觉得真的无所谓,喜欢什么写什么


                            42楼2010-11-27 15:17
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                              just can't agree more


                              47楼2010-11-27 22:12
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