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David,I have seen the story of your childhood,you were so hard!
But you didn't tell us before.I'm Scott,a studend in grade three class five in FLES.Mabe I'm late but I think I can join your bar.I think you don't know who I am .you could ask my classmates.Now i'm in QINGDAO ,my aunt's famliy came here from
America three month ago.Yesterday I saw they chat on line with
there American friends,they write very easy just like: I didnt
c u on my QQ yesterday(I didn't see you.......) and can we do like this .In fact it's realy convenience??????????
But you didn't tell us before.I'm Scott,a studend in grade three class five in FLES.Mabe I'm late but I think I can join your bar.I think you don't know who I am .you could ask my classmates.Now i'm in QINGDAO ,my aunt's famliy came here from
America three month ago.Yesterday I saw they chat on line with
there American friends,they write very easy just like: I didnt
c u on my QQ yesterday(I didn't see you.......) and can we do like this .In fact it's realy convenience??????????
hi! Your story of life is really really interesting. I'm not here to correct you, but i noticed that your a lot of your words are spelled wrong. I could help correcting. On the long long journey of life, you'll never know what happens. It's full of supprises. I hope that you life now is very wealthy and happy! :)
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well, all of my dear friends here, thank you very much for attention to my story for so long time!
I didn't come here to write something for a long time, since I have a lot of things to do!
But I will try to come back as soon as possible. I will paste more here three weeks later. I wish you guys could enjoy that.
天使小宝36 ：
Thank you very much for point out my mistake! YOU KNOW THAT, my English is not very good. I just want to have a try here to write something in English to improve my English.
I am going to very happy if you can hel me to corect my writing! could you PLS tell me your E-mail addrees, and I can send my story to you. And you can send it back after you finish to corect it. OK? also, you can send mail to me if you don't want to show your mail address here. my E-mail: Dongpei71@yahoo.com.cn
Thank you again, 天使小宝36 !
Thanks all of my dear friends here!
I didn't come here to write something for a long time, since I have a lot of things to do!
But I will try to come back as soon as possible. I will paste more here three weeks later. I wish you guys could enjoy that.
天使小宝36 ：
Thank you very much for point out my mistake! YOU KNOW THAT, my English is not very good. I just want to have a try here to write something in English to improve my English.
I am going to very happy if you can hel me to corect my writing! could you PLS tell me your E-mail addrees, and I can send my story to you. And you can send it back after you finish to corect it. OK? also, you can send mail to me if you don't want to show your mail address here. my E-mail: Dongpei71@yahoo.com.cn
Thank you again, 天使小宝36 !
Thanks all of my dear friends here!
Hello, every one, I am back. my story will be continue from this week!
Our teacher treated us kindly, and what we could do for him was went to the forest to pick up the firewood for him when we had free time, or took fresh fruit to him from our home, because almost all of us had fruit trees in our back yard. Which were pear, peach, apple, and persimmon and some unnamed wild-fruit.
Another important thing we could do for our teacher was study harder and tried to get higher points in final examinations. Our teacher was really proud of us after each standard test of our county(全县统考), because we always did very good job. Each time when we got good result in final examination, we could get prize form our teacher, which was really made us exciting and unforgettable. We will never forget those wonderful experiences.
Spring and autumn are the best time in my hometown. I mean not only for the weather, but also for each family. I mentioned that at the beginning of my story. Each spring and autumn, after the new school term beginning, our teacher took us to have picnic far away from our village as prize of our test. What I want to say is it was real-picnic, you never image that. We had no bread and banger, no pop-corn and Coca-Cola, no cookies and milk when I was child. I would like to say “no everything”. Most of food which we take to have picnic today we never seen them, and even heard about them at that time.
Our teacher treated us kindly, and what we could do for him was went to the forest to pick up the firewood for him when we had free time, or took fresh fruit to him from our home, because almost all of us had fruit trees in our back yard. Which were pear, peach, apple, and persimmon and some unnamed wild-fruit.
Another important thing we could do for our teacher was study harder and tried to get higher points in final examinations. Our teacher was really proud of us after each standard test of our county(全县统考), because we always did very good job. Each time when we got good result in final examination, we could get prize form our teacher, which was really made us exciting and unforgettable. We will never forget those wonderful experiences.
Spring and autumn are the best time in my hometown. I mean not only for the weather, but also for each family. I mentioned that at the beginning of my story. Each spring and autumn, after the new school term beginning, our teacher took us to have picnic far away from our village as prize of our test. What I want to say is it was real-picnic, you never image that. We had no bread and banger, no pop-corn and Coca-Cola, no cookies and milk when I was child. I would like to say “no everything”. Most of food which we take to have picnic today we never seen them, and even heard about them at that time.
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