刚刚改的太快还是大意了!抱歉! 【“不行,那些家伙走光了也没关系,只有你不行。” No. It doesn't matter that all of them go away, except you.】 试试:all of them'd left.已经离开了+虚拟语气,短句有力。 【“我的小布尔什维克,如果你也要走,如果你会变成别人的,我还不如把你——” My little Bolshevik, if you're going to leave and become a possession of someone else', I would rather I got you...】 试试:if you're leaving and becoming a possession of someone else' 【“我的名字是王耀,历经五千年,就算再过五千年,也不会改变。” My name is Wang Yao, which has lasted for a five thousand years, yet it wouldn't change for another.】 用:it won't change。wouldn't的虚拟语气会弱化意思,直接change收尾比较坚决。 多用进行时表将来,比较地道。 啊。。以上仅供参考=V=
噫。没什么的我在阿尔混么近水楼台= = 感觉这个还是有点问题↓ 【“我的名字是王耀,历经五千年,就算再过五千年,也不会改变。” My name is Wang Yao, which has lasted for a five thousand years, yet it wouldn't change for another.】 干脆这样?: (My name is Wang Yao, which has lasted for five thousand years. And no matter how many years will pass, it doesn change.)?感觉还是有微妙的出轨……
=============我是说明V1.1的分割线============== 黑陶大很强大,我恬不知耻地在大人的版本之上又进行了胡诌[殴打 于是有标记(7)是黑陶大的,没标记的是楼主的,*是我·在黑陶大的基础上诌的· =============我是补丁的分割线[什么补丁啊去死=============== “你一定要去?” You insist on leaving,don't you? 或者:So you insist on leaving (非问句) “王耀,你知道吗,向日葵开花后,它的精灵就会一直向太阳飞去,但是等不到它飞到太阳上,向日葵就会枯萎,它也会死掉。” Yao, have
you heard about that? When they're blossoming, The spirits left the
sunflowers and fly towards the sun but could never touch it before they
withered.* ——>fly 改成 flying(表问我为啥)