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所以是要我来艾特你们才会出现是吧……
@灵与美 我的更文时间真心越来越奇葩了...
@蒲草田的雨ing 小蒲你真的好久没来了 而且缪衾很快就可以出场了我对不起你...
@_____蔷薇咒 阿贝快来吧 你肿么不见了?
@灬澤殿至上灬 老哥我就不说什么了→_→
@彼岸·微凉 漓姐你不要不出现 我是爱你的!
@Art栀盎 小盎哥哥你是在潜水吗……


IP属地:北京196楼2013-07-19 13:10
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    来了TUT 我错了真的是好久没来了- -


    来自手机贴吧197楼2013-07-19 13:16
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      2026-05-02 03:34:51
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      感觉这次法庭对决挺有意思的,我也好想掺一脚→_→其实你会让那个司马懿赢的对吧


      IP属地:广西来自Android客户端198楼2013-07-19 13:31
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        爱此文风,力顶!楼主加油!
        现在终于找到自己喜欢的文风了。


        IP属地:河南来自手机贴吧199楼2013-07-19 14:46
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          不过此文到底想表什么?不太清楚用意何在。


          IP属地:河南来自手机贴吧200楼2013-07-19 14:47
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            看到了 长评等我到酒店再给你


            IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端201楼2013-07-19 16:00
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              最近写文都会听Westlife的歌

              If only you could see the tears
              In the world you left behind
              If only you could heal my heart
              Just one more time
              Even when I close my eyes
              There's an image of your face
              And once again I come to realise
              You're a loss I can't replace
              Soledad
              It's a keeping for the lonely
              Since the day that you were gone
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              In my heart you were the only
              And your memory lives on
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              Walking down the streets
              Of Nothingville
              Where our love was young and free
              Can't believe just what an empty place
              It has come to be
              I would give my life away
              If it could only be the same
              Cause I can't still the voice inside of me
              That is calling out your name
              Soledad
              It's a keeping for the lonely
              Since the day that you were gone
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              In my heart you were the only
              And your memory lives on
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              Time will never change the things you told me
              After all we're meant to be
              Love will bring us back to you and me
              If only you could see
              Soledad
              It's a keeping for the lonely
              Since the day that you were gone
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              In my heart you were the only
              And your memory lives on
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              It's a keeping for the lonely
              Since the day that you were gone
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad
              In my heart you were the only
              And your memory lives on
              Why did you leave me
              Soledad


              IP属地:北京204楼2013-07-19 19:50
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                这一首轻松一点

                Just a smile and the rain is gone
                Can hardly believe it (yeah)
                There’s an angel standing next to me
                Reaching for my heart
                Just a smile and there’s no way back
                Can hardly believe it (yeah)
                But there’s an angel calling me
                Reaching for my heart
                I know, that I’ll be okay now
                (This time) it’s real
                I lay my love on you
                It’s all I wanna do
                Everytime I breathe I feel brand new
                You open up my heart
                Show me all your love, and walk right through
                As I lay my love on you
                I was lost in a lonely place
                Could hardly believe it (yeah)
                Holding on to yesterday
                Far, far too long(Now)
                I believe its ok cause this time it’s real
                I lay my love on you
                It’s all I wanna do
                Everytime I breathe I feel brand new
                You open up my heart
                Show me all your love, and walk right through (oh yeah~)
                As I lay my love on you
                I never knew that love could fell so good
                Like once in a lifetime
                You change my world
                I lay my love on you
                You make me feel brand new
                Show me all your love, and walk right through (oh yeah~)
                As I lay my love on you
                I lay my love on you
                It’s all I wanna do
                Everytime I breathe I feel brand new
                You open up my heart
                Show me all your love, and walk right through
                As I lay my love on you
                I lay my love on you
                You make me feel brand new
                You open up my heart
                Show me all your love, and walk right through (oh yeah~)
                As I lay my love on you
                As I lay my love on you


                IP属地:北京207楼2013-07-19 22:03
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                  2026-05-02 03:28:51
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                  咳咳更文来了 第一场官司什么的 重头戏什么的 必须要艾特某个人→_→@宫璃浅浅
                  然后声明一下 我对中国大陆的法庭审判真心不熟【TVB看太多】 所以会有很多程序上的漏洞什么之类的 我写出来就已经准备好被拍砖了……
                  不知道我这样写出来会不会被专业人士追打 求建议啊啊啊!!!


                  IP属地:北京208楼2013-07-19 23:16
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                    我觉得司马懿瞬间变成屌丝了,你妹啊……再怎么着也不至于邋遢成这个样子吧,我三国杀和无双里包括历史上的司马娘娘都是临危不惧的啊,别告诉我你在黑他= =
                    打官司这块写的真的有好点乱,我也看不明白到底写了什么东西……反正依然讨厌那种特别自我到心高气傲的性格……就……就这样吧= =


                    IP属地:河南来自iPhone客户端210楼2013-07-19 23:57
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                      法庭的戏我也看得模糊,只能说我等待欧洲出场了╮(╯▽╰)╭


                      IP属地:广西来自Android客户端211楼2013-07-20 00:17
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                        才从厦门回来~靖子幸苦了~期待出场~


                        212楼2013-07-20 00:33
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                          看不懂只能看热闹了


                          213楼2013-07-20 07:05
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