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来自Android客户端248楼2013-08-03 13:51
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    啊拉拉 我的大型长篇吐槽来了 ps1.【你明明知道我的长评就是大型吐槽 →_→】
    首先 我一开始评论之前我不好意思说我又重看了一次第一篇到最后一篇 原因是 我根本就搞不懂什么跟什么啊! 前后链接对我来说有点神转折 是因为长时间的修炼导致我大脑退化了么?不对啊 我还是写完暑假作业这种神物了啊?! 所以应该不是我的问题 嗯 应该
    接着 是真·文评了 从我看的更新的篇章以来 整个故事的情节掌握的很有风度 整个故事的走向充满着自己独特的风格 我仿佛能够从字里行间中读出你自己来【ps2.这真的不是因为你是我老妹的缘故?!还是我的错觉Orz 】 故事之间的转折也很不错 虽然我一度被弄的头晕【ps3.真的不是智商的问题?】从总体上 这是篇不错的文坑 如果给萧奇【ps4.原谅我忘记了我们语文老师的名字】看的话 或许会给好评点赞【ps5.好像插入了什么乱七八糟的东西?!】
    接着接着 为什么砍刀写刘稚的篇章的时候...我感觉那么怪啊? 难道是因为当初的人设太过于强大了么? 以及你那个对人物的理解 什么叫强到大的BUG人物?你在逗我? 如果我给你看了《术誓》的主角你岂不是有种想死的冲动?! 还有还有!!!! 你特么在刘稚人物理解的后面那段话加上去是什么意思?! 你的取向已经不正常了么? 哦不 我那可爱又听话取向正常的好妹妹啊!!!!


    IP属地:浙江249楼2013-08-05 23:31
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      2026-05-02 04:49:38
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      来自Android客户端250楼2013-08-13 23:13
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        之前因为有事所以耽搁了这么久 从明天开始就会恢复到每日一更了 虽然我知道很多人都已经潜了不过我看到点击率上升还是会很开心的 希望还是会有一些评论啊( =∩ω∩= )
        这几天去外面玩了一下 不过刚好遇到台风 倒霉啊我去 拍了几张照片 参加一下暑假的活动吧〜以及今晚会更新一些歌哟


        IP属地:北京来自iPad251楼2013-08-14 16:27
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          坐等文文~


          252楼2013-08-14 16:34
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            饥饿游戏的主题曲 贴子热一热……正能量一下

            I remember tears streaming down your face,
            When I said I'll never let you go.
            When all those shadows almost killed your light,
            I remember, you said "Don't leave me here alone."
            But all that's dead and gone and past,tonight;
            Just close your eyes,
            The sun is going down.
            You'll be alright,
            No one can hurt you now.
            Come morning light,
            You and I'll be safe and sound.
            Don't you dare look out your window,darling,
            Everything's on fire
            The war outside our door keeps raging on.
            Hold on to this lullaby;
            Even when the music's gone.gone
            Just close your eyes,
            The sun is going down.
            You'll be alright,
            No one can hurt you now.
            The morning light,
            You and I'll be safe and sound.
            Just close your eyes,
            You'll be alright.
            Come morning light,
            You and I'll be safe and sound.


            IP属地:北京253楼2013-08-15 16:12
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              歌很赞,《饥饿游戏》当初还特地上电影院看的,很不错的题材。


              254楼2013-08-15 17:55
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                你们是都死绝了吗……@宫璃浅浅 @灵与美 给你们的好福利 重戏啊有木有!!
                晚上来欢腾一下 经典老歌lemon tree 听到这个莫名的心情就会好

                I'm sitting here in a boring room.
                It's just another rainy Sunday afternoon.
                I'm waisting my time, I got nothing to do.
                I'm hanging around, I'm waiting for you.
                But nothing ever happens, and I wonder.
                I'm driving around in my car.
                I'm driving too fast, I'm drving too far.
                I'd like to change my point of view.
                I felt so lonely, I'm waiting for you.
                But nothing ever happens, and I wonder.
                I wonder how, I wonder why.
                Yesterday you told me about the blue, blue sky.
                And all that I can see is just a yellow lemon tree.
                I'm turning my head up and down.
                I'm turning, turning, turning, turning, turning around.
                And all that I can see is just another yellow lemon tree.
                I'm sitting here, and I miss the power.
                I'd like to go out taking a shower.
                But there's a heavy clound inside my mind.
                I feel so tired, and put myself into bed.
                Where nothing ever happens, and I wonder.
                Isolation is not good for me
                Isolation I don't want to sit on the lemon tree
                I'm stepping around in a desert of joy
                Baby, anyhow I get another toy
                And everthing will happen, and you wonder
                I wonder how, I wonder why
                Yesterday you told me about the blue, blue sky
                And all that I can see is just a yellow lemon tree
                I'm turning my head up and down
                I'm turning, turning, turning, turning, turning around
                And all that I can see is just another yellow lemon tree
                I wonder how, I wonder why
                Yesterday you told me about the blue, blue sky
                And all that I can see
                And all that I can see
                And all that I can see is just a yellow lemon tree


                IP属地:北京257楼2013-08-15 23:03
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                  2026-05-02 04:43:38
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                  拖了这么久我以为你至少会两更呢那个提纲我都快忘了你还要不要


                  IP属地:广西来自Android客户端258楼2013-08-15 23:17
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                    感觉刘稚会投入别人的怀抱~虽说百里和刘稚的关系无关爱情风月,
                    但看到这一幕还是感触万分。


                    259楼2013-08-16 13:27
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                      第十章的上我重发 因为改了一点……强迫症爆发了没办法
                      以及连着新的一更发@猎天使魔女c @蒲草田的雨ing @深色瞳_ 抱歉让你们久等了!


                      IP属地:北京261楼2013-08-16 19:04
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                        来自Android客户端265楼2013-08-16 20:53
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