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O(∩_∩)O哈哈~,你的鼓励真好!!谢谢你!


IP属地:北京78楼2012-01-31 13:40
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    这是实话啊……我还没接到过这样深情的信…能这么爱到无私


    79楼2012-01-31 13:46
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      IP属地:北京80楼2012-01-31 13:51
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        哈哈~


        81楼2012-01-31 13:59
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          !!!


          IP属地:北京82楼2012-02-03 15:55
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            IP属地:北京83楼2012-02-04 17:36
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              Well, I have finished reading the whole letter
              It seems that you have talent on writing, but the passage may be too exaggerated, especially when you describe him. I still very appreciate your effort which spent on this writing, and finally bless you that it may come true.
              There are few grammar mistakes in your passage...


              IP属地:德国84楼2012-02-04 19:10
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                Thank you for pointing out my mistakes in the first place, and I have proofread it after I posted it here and corrected them all. But unfortunately there is also a very insignificant error in your letter as well, which relates to the gramatical item---voice. Please be careful enough to pick it out. Thanks again for your compliment and I am gonna make more efforts on writing. Lastly,my praise for him is not dramatic. If you met him in person, your praise for him would be more, I am afraid, not less than mine...


                IP属地:北京85楼2012-02-05 13:05
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                  IP属地:北京86楼2012-02-14 09:54
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                    这什么吧啊


                    IP属地:河南来自iPhone客户端87楼2024-08-20 23:48
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