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我们从大到小进行描述,意思是先从描述大的场景,比如在哪个环境,有几个人,有什么东西。接着重点描述这幅图中比较重要的东西,如这个图中,重点就是两个人


IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端297楼2024-09-27 21:44
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    开头第一句直接描述图画是不是有点生硬突然,所以需要过渡下,第一句就写As vividly depicted in the picture,
    是不是感觉有点高大上?其实意思很简单:如图所示


    IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端298楼2024-09-27 21:45
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      2026-01-22 07:33:25
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      接着就简单的介绍一下场景,比如这幅图很简单,两个人坐在沙发上,那么我们第一句就可以这么写
      As vividly depicted in the picture, there is a father and son sitting on a sofa.
      意思是 如图所示,有一对父子坐在一个沙发上


      IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端299楼2024-09-27 21:49
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        很简单吧,大家可以学习一些副词,在我推荐的视频那里,比如在...前面 in the front of,在左边的图画里 in the left picture等等


        IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端300楼2024-09-27 21:50
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          我们接着说,大的简单描写完了,就要详细描写图的重点了,也就是两个人


          IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端301楼2024-09-27 21:51
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            我能可以先写儿子,然后用一个转折描写父亲


            IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端302楼2024-09-27 21:52
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              抓住人物的动作,儿子抓住父亲的手臂,儿子在注视父亲
              所以这么写:Holding his father's arm, the son looks confused because his father has no reaction to his words / talk.


              IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端303楼2024-09-27 21:54
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                父亲的动作就是看手机,并且没有理会儿子,就可以用一个转折:although the father is sitting beside his son, he is merely immersed in the cell phone.


                IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端304楼2024-09-27 21:56
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                  完整的就是As vividly depicted in the picture, there is a father and son sitting on a sofa. Holding his father's arm, the son looks confused because his father has no reaction to his words / talk. although the father is sitting beside his son, he is merely immersed in the cell phone.最后加上图画描写


                  IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端305楼2024-09-27 21:56
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                    我这样讲是不是还是有些不懂?那大家可以去看石雷鹏的大作文课,学习一下他图画描写的思路


                    IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端306楼2024-09-27 21:57
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                      不喜欢或者没那么多时间的,就去看我推荐的up主的课,就20分钟



                      IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端307楼2024-09-27 21:58
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                        再来看这幅图


                        IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端308楼2024-09-27 22:02
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                          这个题目有两张图画,两幅图都要描写,我喜欢从左到右。


                          IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端309楼2024-09-27 22:03
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                            感动,先收藏了我之前买了石磊鹏30个功能句,冲刺20篇还没到。作文就靠你了老哥。


                            310楼2024-09-27 22:08
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                              为了简洁一点和顺畅一点,开头第一句可以改一下
                              In the left picture,there is a young girl in front of a television. followling the workout video,she is doing exercise. By contrast,in the right one,although the young man is also watching a workout video,he is lazily lying on a sofa and thinking that watching equals practice.


                              IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端311楼2024-09-27 22:32
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