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我能可以先写儿子,然后用一个转折描写父亲


IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端302楼2024-09-27 21:52
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    抓住人物的动作,儿子抓住父亲的手臂,儿子在注视父亲
    所以这么写:Holding his father's arm, the son looks confused because his father has no reaction to his words / talk.


    IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端303楼2024-09-27 21:54
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      2026-01-24 15:35:31
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      父亲的动作就是看手机,并且没有理会儿子,就可以用一个转折:although the father is sitting beside his son, he is merely immersed in the cell phone.


      IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端304楼2024-09-27 21:56
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        完整的就是As vividly depicted in the picture, there is a father and son sitting on a sofa. Holding his father's arm, the son looks confused because his father has no reaction to his words / talk. although the father is sitting beside his son, he is merely immersed in the cell phone.最后加上图画描写


        IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端305楼2024-09-27 21:56
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          我这样讲是不是还是有些不懂?那大家可以去看石雷鹏的大作文课,学习一下他图画描写的思路


          IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端306楼2024-09-27 21:57
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            不喜欢或者没那么多时间的,就去看我推荐的up主的课,就20分钟



            IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端307楼2024-09-27 21:58
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              再来看这幅图


              IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端308楼2024-09-27 22:02
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                这个题目有两张图画,两幅图都要描写,我喜欢从左到右。


                IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端309楼2024-09-27 22:03
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                  2026-01-24 15:29:31
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                  为了简洁一点和顺畅一点,开头第一句可以改一下
                  In the left picture,there is a young girl in front of a television. followling the workout video,she is doing exercise. By contrast,in the right one,although the young man is also watching a workout video,he is lazily lying on a sofa and thinking that watching equals practice.


                  IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端311楼2024-09-27 22:32
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                    大家参考一下,我自己感觉我讲的不是很好,不过大家去b站听了那两节课之后就能懂了,听了的同学可以给我个反馈


                    IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端312楼2024-09-27 22:33
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                      我套用模板的例子,一般是写在作文纸上,放家里了,如果有需要,国庆回去给大家看


                      IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端316楼2024-09-27 22:45
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                        明天更新消极类大作文模板


                        IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端317楼2024-09-27 22:45
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                          我来更新啦,下面是消极类大作文,第一段和第三段与积极类大作文一样,区别在第二段


                          IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端329楼2024-10-01 09:45
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                            看的到扣1




                            IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端330楼2024-10-01 09:45
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                              2026-01-24 15:23:31
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                              需要我自己总结模板的文档,也可以私我,免费


                              IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端331楼2024-10-01 09:46
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