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大致内容懒得改了、、、就是语法上改了一些==
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阿黛尔回到住宅,想起了那日记,于是,她就窝在客厅的沙发上,开始读了起来。她才看了一句就皱了皱眉头,少女的花痴日记显然没那么好看,时间是去年,但是为了线索,阿黛尔又看了下去。
“Dear diary
   I met a particularly handsome gentleman! He said he’s a poet and he invited me to dance with him twice tonight. And the MOST excting thing is HE SAID HE LOVED ME! HE SAID HE WANTED TO MEET ME THE TOMORROW NIGHT in the woods beside Thames. I’m anxious to meet him again, but how can I ask my mother for permission? It’s really a problem!
“Dear diary
   I went to meet him after all. I must thank Amy, for she told my mother that I was with her. I felt stressed and excited while I was waiting for him! Eventually, he appeared. Oh, at last! I felt hundreds of years had run out. A little dear began to knock on my heart rapidly and madly. The moonlight which looked like water falling from the tree, enlightened him and made him looked like a perfect Greek statue. God! He came to me. Ah, I held my breath, for I didn't want him to find out I’m wild with joy. He came more and more closely. I was daydreaming until he was standing just one metre in front of me! He’s so polite, elegant and lovely, and I even don’t know how to describe him. Did you have the same experience, my dear diary? He praised my dress, my eyes and everything about me. He read a poem beside my ear. His vioce was so soft, attractive and smooth. I could even feel his breath touching my neck. It felt like silk which streams gently touching my neck , shoulder, chest and so on. I felt like being shocked by electricity. I felt I was going to die at that moment. A ton of colourful butterflies were flying in my mind. The feeling was excellent!
… … … …”
阿黛尔没有再看下去,只是大概浏览了下面的文字,花痴,不停得花痴。她感到胃部搅动,但这是值得的,她现在知道那人的昵称叫Jacky。
TBC
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有些短,我还是冷点比较正常==
对于这种真是绞脑无能


117楼2010-12-22 17:36
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    那我会悲剧的==,法语我总共才会个10句日常会话、、


    119楼2010-12-23 17:15
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      哦,是哦,没发现,Thx///
      现在在这里祝大家Merry Christmas~~~~~~~
      接下来是圣诞夜特别版~后续内容来得及今天出,来不及下星期~


      121楼2010-12-24 17:15
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        今天不更了,其实我是有私心的,真的下面就一个框架,具体内容还没想好..因为还是日记形式,我需要休息一下,再继续了.
        今天特别版,有一句话,在正文结尾还会出现


        123楼2010-12-24 17:53
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          猜对者,得飞吻一个,hiahiahia////


          124楼2010-12-24 17:54
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            错啦,哈哈、、、我准备第五节更完暂停一个月,期末考要好好准备,那会影响中考的,没意见吧~


            127楼2010-12-25 17:26
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              晚安你的开玩笑是神马意思…如果说是你的猜测,那么no,如果是我的暂停…yes…我不得不停上20来天…考试的年级排名对我很重要,我想说我得重回前30…不然老师不会放过我的…


              129楼2010-12-26 13:19
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                感谢你还能写长诗,啊哈哈,我都写不出==、、
                数学神马的都是浮云,我现在最担心语文、、、我也不知道我怎么就突然喜欢数学了、、
                这周小测验一个接一个的、、周五好好玩玩,然后就要发奋了,哈哈,我准备把一次旅行分成两个版本,和圣诞故事一起加在我(有可能是现在)唯一长篇的前面,在写个作者说,准备寒假写完发文库、然后封笔半年。。。


                133楼2010-12-27 20:09
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                  再别康桥~~~我就是为了那神马桥、、、动力啊,但是太遥远了


                  134楼2010-12-27 20:10
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                    我改了,LS你知道吧,一次旅行就中文、、、
                    我觉得改的只要看结尾、、中间忽略,衔接不畅、、只是分开显得完整而已。。
                    第五节已经写完了,还是改完发、、、
                    我想到一首歌:Wishing you were somehow here again
                    我希望我没记错,是歌剧魅影里的,歌词可以看我空间的文、


                    137楼2010-12-31 18:54
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                      回复:139楼
                      猜对了、、、


                      141楼2011-01-01 15:36
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                        暗示一次旅行的内容,仅此而已、、
                        725的话、、、先把下面的密码破了。。然后就是和那个有关~当然和陌生人有关~725有两层意思。答案1月21日考完试后揭晓、、、


                        144楼2011-01-01 19:30
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                          密码打错啦,sorry
                          Ps ceaofy sreadst tnrpy
                          应该是这样


                          145楼2011-01-02 22:24
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                            我觉得你学过吧。。是词组吧==


                            147楼2011-01-08 15:44
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                              其实非常简单、、你觉得我会写一个很难的么?没那么多工夫呀,囧、、、


                              149楼2011-01-11 19:34
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