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【紧急求助】英语好的各位亲帮帮我

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请各位亲帮帮我
这是一篇英语小作文
During the spring festival you have got 2000 yuan for you pocket money.How can you spend your money?
大家帮帮我字数大约50词左右,不要太难大约高一的水平。请各位亲尽快给我最好在今晚!!
千万不要让此贴沉入大海!!
拜托了


1楼2010-07-15 19:26回复
    帮帮我啊!!


    2楼2010-07-15 19:29
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      3楼2010-07-15 19:42
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        虽然我英语不好,帮不了你写,但我可以帮你顶,不让它沉哈
        顶一下
        帮个忙


        4楼2010-07-15 19:44
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          谢了


          5楼2010-07-15 19:45
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            这样吧,你写出来,我帮你修改,如果总是靠别人,自己不动脑筋的话,英语是提高不了的----有2000压岁钱,真是不少,自己计划下呗----当然不是现实


            7楼2010-07-15 19:59
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              说你要卖完暮光之城所有周边啊!(显然钱不够!)
              现在还有作业啊!


              8楼2010-07-15 20:01
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                你要上高一吗
                同命啊!


                9楼2010-07-15 20:02
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                  已经帮你顶了很多了吧!


                  10楼2010-07-15 20:02
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                    我帮你,我最近在学托福


                    11楼2010-07-15 20:04
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                      哦哦!
                      你要留学吗


                      12楼2010-07-15 20:05
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                        14楼2010-07-15 20:20
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                          Twilight
                                  Recent European and American market a film, called "twilight". Film 17-year-old girl Bella once again in the kind of coincidence to know vampire Edward, since then, two people have quietly buried under the heart, the emotional seed.
                                  On such a film, the box office in Europe and the United States had been on, before, according to statistics, has more than 100 million. Why so red, we first look
                                        First: vampires for a long time have not released the subject matter
                                        Second: vampire love experience is eye appealing, but also, and human love.
                                        Third: between those bizarre stories.
                                  If you take the vampire, it not only represents, bloodthirsty, also includes, permanent sturdy truck and ...... pretty Lianpang
                                         "Twilight", he let us know, like humans, can have different love, as any miracle can happen. Desperate film Bella and Edward together. He knows that Edward is really love her, but she also knew a part would also like to have her blood. But she is still excited regardless of health, Edward to fight back, and he do not want to hurt Bella. However, and vampires together, inevitably some difficulties, the difficulties that will be two separate, but it is not, will only make them more concerned about each other, even more in love with each other. Difficulties only their tightly "tied" together and never part.
                                   Let us pray that they will always be together, never separated ...... 


                          15楼2010-07-15 20:21
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