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我参加了一个全国的英语比赛,今天中午刚刚笔试完。口试的英语作文发在这里,小瑞瑞帮我检查一下,有没有什么不通顺,语法不对的地方帮我改一下~~谢谢!


1楼2010-04-18 13:37回复
    Hello!I'm ZhangJiaRui.My English name is Sue. T'm eleven years old.I'm in Class 2 ,Grade 6. I have many good friends. They are friendly to me. I like singing ,seeing movies, reading books and surfing the Internet. I surf the Internet three times a week. I read books everyday. And I sports everyday. I think I'm not very healthy.But I have a good habit. I sleep 10 hours everyday. My favorite movie is Titanic. My favorite singer is Jolin. She's beautiful. I like eating dumplings, mooncakes, strawberries...... I'm surfing the Internet, playing sports, visiting my friends and my family in summer holiday. I go to school by bus everyday. It takes me abuot 20 minutes. I am a good student. I do my homework everyday. It takes me abuot 90 minutes. I can speak Chinese and English. I like English best. And I learn English everyday. I like atumn best. It's cool! In atumn, we can go to a park, fly a kite, have a barbecue...... My favorite fastivel is Chinese New Year. Because people give money in red packets to us.
    This is me. I hope you can make friends with me!   


    2楼2010-04-18 13:38
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      2025-11-26 22:35:09
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      不是你们那边教材低级,是我学的快。我学到初二了(*^__^*) 嘻嘻,所以你才会有不认识的~~


      4楼2010-04-18 13:48
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        我用seeing movies的原因是我不经常去电影院,我只是在家里看电影频道的电影,所以就没用go to movies。还有,我想用一般现在时代表一般将来时。是八下第三单元学的。有些地方就是打错了。
        还有谢谢小瑞瑞!!!


        23楼2010-04-24 17:38
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          回复:27楼
          有什么好奇怪的吗?我们这边小学教材是牛津的,你们初三学的,我们这里六年级也可能有的。


          30楼2010-04-25 15:36
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            回复:26楼
            ...........可以


            31楼2010-04-25 15:53
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              回复:27楼
              并且,就算学到初三也没有什么好牛的。各地和各地的教材都不一样,你学初中的时候,大概四年级吧?初一的不记得什么了吧?


              32楼2010-04-25 15:55
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                回复:28楼
                你都学到初三了,应该知道这种作文不用分段吧?


                33楼2010-04-25 15:56
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                  2025-11-26 22:29:09
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                  还好吧,我并不觉得这是什么高难度。毕竟,笔试就不简单了,我学到初二才够用。这篇作文就是把我从小学学到初二的东西整理一下罢了。
                  什么作文要用到过去完成时................再说了,自己想用什么时态就用什么时态,管他的呢!


                  34楼2010-04-25 15:58
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                    回复:26楼
                    难道我会参加五年组的吗..........


                    35楼2010-04-25 15:59
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