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原创:Don't Cry 改编五言古诗。【今夕莫悲戚】

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貌似我加会员的时候说过我给吧里做贡献。。。
今儿上午半节化学课写出来的。
不当之处轻拍。。
虽然这个做法很可耻,但我还是说下吧。。我是高一的。


1楼2010-03-23 12:51回复
                                今夕莫悲戚
    卿语声细细,眼中前重语。心悲且敛泪,泣珠莫染衣。知卿离别苦,与卿原无异。
    不觉韶华改,心坚如金玉。仙境别红尘,今夕莫悲戚。
    听卿絮絮语,掩面长太息。临别惜相亲,莫作不良计。自当长相思,云雨浮心际。
    仙境别红尘,今夕莫悲戚。
    卿当铭心腑,常存抱柱信。卿当常记取,此时我心意。浮生各有道,聊可慰孤寂。
    明朝复欢颜,晨曦已微煦。心悲且敛泪,泣珠莫染衣。仙境别红尘,今夕莫悲戚。
    重逢自有时,今夕莫悲戚。
    


    2楼2010-03-23 12:51
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      无比强大 同是高一的路过?


      3楼2010-03-23 12:56
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        更正:眼中千重语


        4楼2010-03-23 12:57
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          有才····这个必须顶顶顶顶顶························


          IP属地:安徽5楼2010-03-23 12:59
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            上化学不好好听讲...化学老师会对你有意见的


            6楼2010-03-23 13:10
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              此为对照版。。。
              Talk to me softly.
              卿语声细细
              There's something in Ur eyes!
              眼中千重语
              Don't hang Ur head in sorro
              心悲且敛泪
              And please don't cry!
              泣珠莫染衣
              I know how you feel inside
              知卿离别苦
              I've been there before
              与卿原无异
              Somethin's changin' inside you!
              And don't you know?
              不觉韶华改
              Don't you cry tonight!
              I still love U baby!
              心坚如金玉
              Don't U cry tonight!
              Don't U cry tonight!
              There's a heaven above you baby!
              仙境别红尘
              And don't U cry tonight!
              今夕莫悲戚
              Give me a whisper.
              听卿絮絮语
              And give me a sigh.
              掩面长太息
              give me a kiss Before U tell me goodbye!
              临别惜相亲
              Don't U take it so hard now!
              And please don't take it so bad!
              莫作不良计
              I'll still B thinkin' of U!
              自当长相思
              And the times we had...baby.
              云雨浮心际
              And don't U cry tonight!
              Don't U cry tonight!
              Don't U cry tonight!
              There's a heaven above you baby!
              仙境别红尘
              And don't U cry tonight!
              今夕莫悲戚
              And please remember!
              That I never lied!
              卿当铭心腑,常存抱柱信
              And please remember!
              How I felt inside now,honey!
              卿当常记取,此时我心意
              U gotta make it Ur own way!
              But U'll be alright now sugar!
              浮生各有道,聊可慰孤寂。
              U'll feel better tomorrow!
              Come the morning light now baby!
              明朝复欢颜,晨曦已微煦
              And don't U cry tonight!
              And don't U cry tonight!
              And don't U cry tonight!
              心悲且敛泪,泣珠莫染衣。
              There's a heaven above U baby!
              And don't U cry!
              仙境别红尘,今夕莫悲戚
              Don't U ever cry
              Don't U cry tonight!
              Baby maybe someday.
              Don't U cry!
              Don't U ever cry!
              Don't U cry!
              Tonight!
              重逢自有时,今夕莫悲戚


              7楼2010-03-23 13:12
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                回复:6楼
                没关系,我是文科生。


                8楼2010-03-23 13:12
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                  回复:8楼
                  15岁上高一?


                  9楼2010-03-23 13:17
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                    我都15岁半了


                    10楼2010-03-23 13:18
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                      回复:10楼
                      不会吧,你跳级?


                      11楼2010-03-23 13:20
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                        不仅没跳。。小学还上了7年。。。


                        12楼2010-03-23 13:21
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                          没事我初中上了四年,我现在还搁初中混呢


                          13楼2010-03-23 13:22
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                            恩。。我们学校顶风作案。。分了。
                            化学平时要学,考试的时候占文科分值的一半,50分。


                            15楼2010-03-23 13:25
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