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Heat of the summer has just passed, it is autumn season. Last week I accompanied Mr.Brown toured the Great Wall, he seems to visit the Great Wall is the first time, holding guide, Monrovia carrying bag. He and I started a nod to the day after the trip. First, we have posted up, and posed for pictures on the road constantly, I helped him take a lot of pictures. Then we rest on an attraction to add moisture. At this point, we find a signature event, called "care for the environment is everybody's responsibility", we took part in it. After signing his name on the paper we will continue to move forward, but suddenly a bit little girl tied a red scarf stopped us, "This package is your right?
, "She said. Then we realized the package was not on Mr.Brown's body, and he was very moved. He thanked the little girl for this thing and said goodbye to her.
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1楼2010-01-15 00:02回复
    额。。帮改下语法错误吧-0-


    6楼2010-01-15 00:04
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      2026-02-14 00:35:58
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      就看下语法问题就行 谢谢


      8楼2010-01-15 00:05
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        autumn season不是秋季的意思吗


        13楼2010-01-15 00:08
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          谁能帮咱改改


          20楼2010-01-15 00:13
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            -0-等等啊
            我再改改


            27楼2010-01-15 00:20
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              Heat of the summer has just passed, it is autumn. Last week I accompanied Mr.Brown toured the Great Wall,and he was the first time to visit the Great Wall.And he held a guidebook,carried a package.I greeted him by word to the day before the trip. First, we upclimbed the Great Wall , and posed for pictures on the Great Wall, I took a lot of pictures of him and the beautiful sights. Then we rested on the side of the Great Wall to add moisture. At this moment, we found a signature event, called "Care for the environment is everybody's responsibility",and we took part in it. After writed our names on the paper,we continued to move forward, but suddenly a little girl tied a red scarf stopped us, "This package is yours?
              , "She said. Then we found the package of Mr.Brown had gone, so he was very moved. He thanked the little girl for this thing and said goodbye to her.
              Through this incident take me realize the pleasure in helping others is a very good thing.
              现在呢


              28楼2010-01-15 00:39
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                顶上去


                29楼2010-01-15 00:41
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