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见面礼——《相思曲》(我是新手,大家多多指教~)

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望菩提叶,碎撒轮回
                      听天雨花,说末世慈悲
                    是谁向偶而泣,哀悼已逝追忆
                    打开缠绵古城,又是阴风孤魂
                        嫣回望,相思愁
 
                    花前月下,清雅抚琴泪纵横
                    风霜雪夜,蓦然回首嫣然笑
                    叹红尘夜央,亘古长夜染红妆
                    怅涅磐情伤,夜数北风归雁唱
                        看今朝,意踌躇
 
                    衾冷枕寒,眷属心中有痴情
                    月影孤怜,奈何无心天作孽
                    纵使天涯咫尺,只能遥遥相盼
                    坠泪似冰雪唇,只剩相思古痕
                        化星尘,千年焚
 
                    月光如水,伴夜长坐倾耳听
                    风雨摇曳,午夜梦醒花飞去
                    问世情为何物?多少红颜老去
                    丝竹谁听梵唱,跌栖光亮天庭
                        空长叹,思欲绝
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1楼2009-07-08 23:08回复
    第三行答错了一个字:向隅而泣


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