1 At my house courtyardsX
At the court yard of my house. (这个错误竟然自己没看到我有点惊讶啊)
2 We boughtvegetables and meats vegetables such as…..
这个错误怎么说呢。。。你不能纯用中文这么说的。可以直接说 we went grocery shopping, got tons of vegetables and various typesof meat since there r many boys involved and we are definitely crazy aboutmeat. 或者其他都行，你自己可以把这段文字翻译成中文看看，你就会觉得表达起来其实特别特别生硬，蔬菜，我们买了。。。。肉，我们买了。。。你会发现平时聊天绝对不会这么说话的，没有语境也没有感情，那考官就一定不会给你高分。
3play with each other.
其实我知道你想说的是一块玩，但是其实只有小孩才会说play with，成年人可以用hang out. 你可以说 it’s becoming more and more rare(强调) for us to hangout with each other during the work day(加s不加the， 加the不加s)
总结： 其实整个思路还是不错的，但是缺少生活化的细节描述，你想想自己聊这个话题中文会怎么说，肯定能说比如我有个哥们巨能吃肉，结果我们买了三斤肉，他一人就干了一斤半!!或者有个姑娘怕烟熏着衣服，愣是一点肉都没吃之类的吧。所以雅思考试一样，你说的越机械化，你得分越低，越生活化，用词生活化并且准确具体，生动你得分肯定就越高。

1 with a pair of glasses!!!!
Pair of glass 是一对玻璃= = 我印象中唯一看到这种用法是说一双水晶鞋。。。a pair of glass shoes…
2 divided 是分开的意思，也有产生分歧的意思，如果你说的是same group的话，就不能用这个词了。
我能想到的单词有assigned可以指分配人，分配任务，分配东西。Allocated一般不指人。
3 contribute a lot to our friendship 是一个很不错的搭配。满分～～但是加一个close的话就有点画蛇添足了。。。你可以加一个介词来表达让我们的友谊更加的坚固了，但是直接加close的话就有点矛盾。
4 more happier …..亲。。。 基本语法。。。啥情况。。。。
5 even if an eye contact, he can understand what I was thinking about at that time.
Even if 后面要加一个完整的句子。。。。而且这块其实不能用even if.. 你可以说even with only a few eye contact, he ……..
Even if 只能用说even if you are right, even if I go…etc….自己体会差别。
总体来说作业做的相当不错，如果这个语音是你准备了一分钟然后就呈现出来的东西的话，7.5在向你招手。但是有几点不足，我会在微信里面和你说的。

A piece of good news you heard of from TV or the Internet.
What the news was about
When you got this news
Where you got this news from
And explain why you think it was a good piece of news

Describe something that you have shared with others.
What you shared
When you shared it
Who you shared it with
And explain why you shared it or how you felt when you shared it.

Describe an antique or some other old object in your family
What the object is
Where it came from / how your family first got this thing
How long it has been in your family
And explain why your family has kept it.

Describe a thing you bought with little practical value
What the thing was
Where and when you bought it
What it looked like
And explain why it has little practical value.

kindle
1 later and later on
Later 基本上没有单独用的，一般都会说 anhour later, few weeks later。而单独说后来的时候就会用到later on,两者时间的意思是一样的，但是prepositional phrase的应用会让你的句子显得更加的地道。所以在能用的时候要尽量用。
2 还记不记得我跟你说要多用副词??idecided to buy a new one for myself.你想想这个句子里面能不能加?加什么好? 然后for myself其实是句废话，但是完全可以改成原因想想改成什么好，然后告诉我～
3 you can read the kindle whenever you want会不会更好～
4 personally, I strongly recommend you….(一定要养成用副词的习惯)并且最后一句话就跟写作文一样，最好不要这么简单结尾。这个一定要记住。
整体思路不错，该说的全都说了，思路清晰，不错～～除去一些小毛病之外整体很不错!!!