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第一 首段末句提观点：It occurs to me that (+从句)=我认为。。
（此句主语从句高端）
第二 次段首句总起+之后分3个小论点（之间加上的关联词）
俩套足矣：（套餐的使用另你作文逻辑严密，作文很大气）
A套餐 first and foremost（首先），what’s more（其次）， finally（最后）
B套餐 at the beginning(开始) ，later on（然后）， consequently（结果）
每次作文都可以用上其中之一的套餐，不信可以试试。
次段必备: (以下1-15小点为黑色加粗，手机党伤不起啊)
1．devote替换spend
He spends all his spare time in reading.
→ He devotes all his spare time to reading.
2．appreciate 替换thank
Thank you very much for you help. →
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
3．contribute to替换 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →
Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
4．come up with替换think of
5．perfect (ly) 替换good/ very well
He speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).
6．the majority of替换most
The majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.
7．on condition that替换as long as
8．nevertheless替换however
9．spare no efforts to do替换try one’s best to do
10．meanwhile替换at the same time
11．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while
12．for instance替换for example
13．seldom替换not often
14．as a matter of fact 替换in fact
15．due to替换because of
He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
第三 末段总结+提倡
A.套餐When it comes to this issue, my conclusion is thar +从句
（此处表语从句）
此句意思：当涉及到这个问题的时候，我的结论是。。。issue可以根据作文实际更换
B.套餐 We are supposed to do (被动句表示“我们应该做。。。”)
结尾表语从句+被动=秒杀了阅卷者（果然上档次）
本楼凡是有不认识的句子，不认识的词汇，全部回去查工具书搞清楚，
想拿20分以上或者接近满分的，速度小跑去吧。
第一 首段末句提观点：It occurs to me that (+从句)=我认为。。
（此句主语从句高端）
第二 次段首句总起+之后分3个小论点（之间加上的关联词）
俩套足矣：（套餐的使用另你作文逻辑严密，作文很大气）
A套餐 first and foremost（首先），what’s more（其次）， finally（最后）
B套餐 at the beginning(开始) ，later on（然后）， consequently（结果）
每次作文都可以用上其中之一的套餐，不信可以试试。
次段必备: (以下1-15小点为黑色加粗，手机党伤不起啊)
1．devote替换spend
He spends all his spare time in reading.
→ He devotes all his spare time to reading.
2．appreciate 替换thank
Thank you very much for you help. →
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
3．contribute to替换 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →
Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
4．come up with替换think of
5．perfect (ly) 替换good/ very well
He speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).
6．the majority of替换most
The majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.
7．on condition that替换as long as
8．nevertheless替换however
9．spare no efforts to do替换try one’s best to do
10．meanwhile替换at the same time
11．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while
12．for instance替换for example
13．seldom替换not often
14．as a matter of fact 替换in fact
15．due to替换because of
He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
第三 末段总结+提倡
A.套餐When it comes to this issue, my conclusion is thar +从句
（此处表语从句）
此句意思：当涉及到这个问题的时候，我的结论是。。。issue可以根据作文实际更换
B.套餐 We are supposed to do (被动句表示“我们应该做。。。”)
结尾表语从句+被动=秒杀了阅卷者（果然上档次）
本楼凡是有不认识的句子，不认识的词汇，全部回去查工具书搞清楚，
想拿20分以上或者接近满分的，速度小跑去吧。
