回复：花火的翻译。。英语大神帮看一下～

翻译这类东西应该意译多点~歌名花火，怎么能这样译呢，外国人看了不知道是什么感觉~~看歌词意境大概可以译为希望之火，希望之光，明日之光之类的！

花火
Firework
这是一场没有结局的表演
It's a performance that is endless
包含所有荒谬和疯狂
Containing all the absurdity and craziness
像个孩子一样满怀悲伤
Like a kid filled with sadness
静悄悄地熟睡在大地上
Sleeping on the ground quietly.
现在我有些倦了
It's now I am tired
倦得像一朵被风折断的野花
Tired like a wildflower that is broken by the blowing wind
所以我开始变了,变得像一团滚动炽热的花火
So I'm gonna to change, change into rolling and blazing fireworks
现在我有些醉了
It' now I am juiced
醉得像一只找不到方向的野鸽
Juiced like a rockdove with no direction
所以我开始变了,变得像一团暴烈炽热的花火
So I'm gonna to change ,change into fierce and blazing fireworks
自己加工了一下。。。

lz的那个office不错，界面挺好看的。

以后交英语作业就翻小博的作品吧吧里人还能帮翻

感觉歌词，诗句什么的一翻译成英语就缺少了汉语中的意蕴了，很奇怪的感觉。我国文化博大精深啊

This is an endless love game
so absurd and insane
I'm like a sad child
quietly lying asleep on the land
I'm now somewhat tired
like a heart- breaking wild flower
And I'm now somewhat bored
like a hot sparkling fire
I'm gonna get drunk
like an aimless pigeon
And I'm gonna change into a hot sparkling fire

楼主，我重新翻译了一下，要求英文词能够用同样的曲调唱，又要信达雅，下面我列出了简谱，歌词和英文词对应关系，
h=high，h1表示高音C. 原曲是E调。

都是认真学习的好孩子。。。

我在Youtube上找来如下英文版本:
This is a show with no ending
It contains all ridiculousness and craziness
Like a child, I am filled with sorrow
And I sleep on the earth silently
Now, I am a bit tired
Tired lik a wild flower broken off by wind
So, I am changing
Changed into a firework with rolling fire inside
Now, I am turning to be drunk
Drunk lik a wild pigeon unable to find its direction
So, I am changing
Changed to a firework with violent fire inside

楼主，我觉得我花火可以译成burnning. flowers，你觉得怎么样？

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