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New drivers lack
in experience and do not familiarize with different situations thus they are
most likely to have accident.
The “P plate” policy
makes a transition which reminds new drivers to be careful.
That’s good for all the drivers and reduces accident.
Yet new drivers
are allowed to take away the P plate after they have got their license 1 year.
Although they have not drive in that 1 year.
Therefore, drivers
who don’t want to show a P plate or do not buy a car in first year can
exploit the loophole of the policy.
The authority
should restrict the law to remain the efficiency of the policy then.