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IP属地:上海1楼2011-12-06 21:59回复
    倪文超,你把杨元政的“政”打错了!


    2楼2011-12-06 22:01
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      我们的角色分配是不是
      王旭雄:Gork
      张诗尧:captain King
      杨元政:Lam和Peters
      倪文超:kangaroos和旁白?


      3楼2011-12-06 22:04
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        旁:Peters ,our navigator ,was lost again .We were running
        out of food ,so towards evening ,we landed on an unexplored planet .Lam ,our
        pilot ,brought us down gently in a valley close to a great cliff of smooth
        ,black rock .In the cliff there were doors ---- each two storeys high !All
        twelve of us left the spaceship and approached the doors carefully .One was
        opened a little .We went through it and entered a huge cave ,The furniture
        inside was similar to the type on the Earth ,but huge!
        杨:Let’s get out of here ,.This is the home of
        a monster.
        张:It’s clearly partly human ,so it may be a
        friendly monster .We’ll wait .
        旁:The ground began to shake .The door opened and some
        animals hopped in .They looked like kangaroos ,giant kangaroos .Following them
        was a huge monster .It looked almost human except that it had a single ,huge,
        red eye .
        The kangaroos shouted ,Good night
        袋:,Gork and hopped away.
        The Gork saw us .He gave a roar that turned
        our blood to ice
        王:.Aliens ! Aliens in my cave ! How did you get in here?
        Part 2
        I thought fast ,and said quietly ,
        张:Good evening ,Mr Gork .My name is Nobody and these
        people here are my….Gork roared again
        王:
        “I know who you are .You ’re aliens and we kill all
        aliens in this valley .Tomorrow morning ,you are going to die ! All of you !”
        旁:Before we could move ,Gork pressed a button on the
        wall beside him .Steel bars sprang from the ground around us and closed over
        our heads .We were caught like rats in a trap .Gork pressed another button ,and
        a powerful magnet above the cage pulled our guns from our hands .
        杨:“Well Captain ”, “you were wrong about the monster
        being friendly ,weren’t you” ?And why did you say your name was “Nobody
        ”?
        张:“I have a plan and Nobody is part of it ,”.You’ll
        see .
        I turned to Gork and said ‘Mr Gork ,it is
        ture that we are aliens ,but why can’t we be friends ?Believe me
        ,sir ,we come in peace .’Gork said
        王:, ‘You come in pieces but tomorrow you’ll
        be in pieces .But listen,Nobody . I’ll do you a
        favour Tomorrow you’ll be the last one
        to die .
        Peters turned towards me .When he spoke
        ,his voice shook .
        杨:I hope your plan’s a good one ,sir .
        张:Trust me ,We’re all going to live !
        3
        张:listen----plan we’ll----then。。。
        杨:I know----Gork
        张:use----we’ll。。。 gork----nobody
        王:I------room
        袋:what’s----
        王:it’s -----eye
        袋:nobody----gork
        4
        王:nobody-----you
        杨:what-----for
        张:don’t------one
        旁,袋:倪文超 高科:王旭雄 LAM Peters:杨元正 船长:张诗瑶
        以下请王旭雄修改
        


        IP属地:上海4楼2011-12-06 22:05
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          你又把杨元政的“政”打错了!


          5楼2011-12-06 22:07
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            我觉得在“旁:Peters ,our navigator ,was lost again .We were running
            out of food ,so towards evening ,we landed on an unexplored planet .Lam ,our
            pilot ,brought us down gently in a valley close to a great cliff of smooth
            ,black rock .In the cliff there were doors ---- each two storeys high !All
            twelve of us left the spaceship and approached the doors carefully .One was
            opened a little .We went through it and entered a huge cave ,The furniture
            inside was similar to the type on the Earth ,but huge!”这一大段中可以加一些人物的对话,比如Captain在听说Peters迷路的情况下问Lam:“how many food do we have now?”然后Lam说:“We don't have enough food now , Can we land on that planet?' 然后他们就降落在哪个星球上。
            


            6楼2011-12-06 22:13
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              7楼2011-12-06 22:15
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                我们可以不一定完全按照课文上的,可以再补充一些内容。


                8楼2011-12-06 22:19
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                  9楼2011-12-06 22:20
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                    10楼2011-12-06 22:22
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                      Part 1
                      旁:At 2100.Our leading actor—captain king took his team travel
                      in the space. At once travel. When he is thinking next to where travel. Peters
                      ,our navigator , hastily running into his room and said.
                      杨:Captain, I lost the way. Maybe we can not go back to
                      the earth in primary time.
                      张:And we are running out of food ,so I decided to us in
                      tonight land on that unexplored planet. I know it is danger. But we must go
                      there.
                      旁:Then he say to Lam . Lam is our pilot ,
                      张:Lam, tonight we need land on that unexplored planet.
                      杨: No problem
                      旁 He bring them down gently in a valley close to a
                      great cliff of smooth ,black rock .In the cliff there were doors ---- each two
                      storeys high !All of them leave the spaceship and approached the doors
                      carefully .
                      杨: Captain, I think it is beautiful.
                      张:Be careful! I do not think so. Look this door is
                      open. Let get through it
                      旁They enter a huge cave ,The furniture inside is similar
                      to the type on the Earth ,but huge!
                      杨:Let’s get out of here ,.This is the home of
                      a monster. Maybe the monster will kill our. Let us go out now!
                      张:It’s clearly partly human ,so it may be a
                      friendly monster .We’ll wait .
                      旁:The ground began to shake .The door opened and some
                      animals hopped in .They looked like kangaroos ,giant kangaroos .Following them
                      was a huge monster.The kangaroos shouted ,
                      袋: Good night. Gork
                      旁and hopped away. The Gork see them .He gave
                      a roar that turn their blood to ice
                      王:.Aliens ! Aliens in my cave ! How do you get in here?


                      11楼2011-12-06 22:45
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                        这是开头说的
                        Today we will have a show
                        旁: I am aside.
                        This is Gork.
                        This is captain king.
                        This is extra.


                        12楼2011-12-06 22:46
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                          张:listen everyone,here's my plan. The laser torch looks very small,but it's very powerful. we’ll----then。。。
                          杨:I know captain. It's too easy.Then -----Gork.
                          张:Use your brain.If we kill Gork,how will we escape? Can you open the door by yourself? We're-----We'll..... Gork----nobody.
                          王:I can't see!I can't see anything!
                          袋:what’s wrong Gork? Why do you roar?
                          王:it’s -----eye.Help me catch the nobody!
                          袋:nobody----gork
                          


                          13楼2011-12-06 22:55
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                            王:nobody,I know you're in my kangaroos.I will eat you.You're done for.All of you!
                            杨:What do we do now? If we get on the kangaroos, Gork will find us. How can we escape from the cave? I'm so afraid now.
                            张:Use your brain before you speak.We can't get out on the kangaroos but we can get out in them.Gork mustn't find us.Here,get onthis one.
                            综上所述,在原版基础上多加了一些语句,请大家多多提意见!


                            14楼2011-12-06 23:14
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                              Part 2
                              旁:He think fast ,and say quietly
                              张:Good evening ,Mr Gork .My name is Nobody and these
                              people here are my team numbers. We come from……..
                              旁:Gork roared again
                              王:“I know who you are .You ’re aliens and I know
                              what do you want to do! You want to attack our country. I will catch you and
                              take you and you team to the police station. Tomorrow morning ,you are going to
                              die ! All of you !”
                              杨:Let us go out now. He is going to catch us.
                              旁:Before they could move ,Gork pressed a button on the
                              wall beside him .Steel bars sprang from the ground around them and closed over
                              they are heads .We were caught like rats in a trap .
                              张:Don not fidget, use our gun to kill he. Aim at he! Shoot!
                              旁:Before they shoot. Gork pressed another button ,and a
                              powerful magnet above the cage pulled our guns from our hands .
                              杨:“Well Captain ”, “you are wrong about the monster
                              being friendly ,aren’t you” ?We are done for. And why do you say
                              your name is “Nobody ”?
                              张:“I have a plan and Nobody is part of it ,”.This plan
                              can help us escape from the cage. You’ll see .
                              旁:He turn to Gork and say ‘Mr Gork ,it is ture that we
                              are aliens ,but why can’t we be friends ?Believe me ,sir ,we come in
                              peace .’Gork say
                              王:, ‘You come in pieces .why did you want to kill me? Do
                              not tell a lie.I know you want to attack our country? Tomorrow you’ll
                              be in pieces .
                              Peters turned towards me .When he spoke
                              ,his voice shook .
                              杨:I hope your plan’s a good one ,sir .
                              张:Trust me ,We’re all going to live !

                              


                              15楼2011-12-06 23:21
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