Part 3 改写：
After Gork’s dinner,He lies down on his bed
and falls asleep.
“listen, everyone. This is my plan.”Captain
King says and he takes a very small laser torch from his plastic case ,he says:
“Let’s escape by this torch, We will melt the bars and then ……”


Peters interrupts Captain King “I know ,
we will use the torch to kill Gork!”
“Use your brain” captain King says : “If we
kill Gork , how will we escape . We are too weak to open the door.Here is what
we will do! We’ll ……”


Moments later , we are all out of the cage.
Captain King goes over to the bed and stands over the monster’s bed. I said
loudly “Gork , this is Nobody .” Gork wake up ,Captain King uses the torch to
kills Gork’s eye.Gork roars : “I can’t see! My eye!. The noise brings the
kangaroos running into the room. “what’s wrong ?”they shout . Gork shouts back “Nobody, Nobody attacks me!



Part4
旁：Captain King and he team quickly ran among
the kangaroos .Gork said,
王：’Nobody,I know you’re hiding among my
kangaroos I’ll catch you, You’re
finished, all of you.
旁：He opened the cave door a little and told
his kangaroos to go out by one ..As they hopp through the door ,he feel their
backs with his hands to make sure they are not riding on them .
杨：What do we do now ? We can’t get out on the
kangaroos .We’re done for .He will kill us. I don't want to die now
张：Don’t panic ,Peters. We can’t get out on the
kangaroos but we can get out in them .Here ,get inside this one .
旁：Peters climbed into the giant kangaroo’s
pocket .A few moments later ,he escaped through the door to freedom .
张：That’s how we all got free,and back to our
spaceship and, finally ,back to the safety of the Earth.
杨：‘What happened to Gork?’
张：Gork? I don’t know .Maybe he’s still in his
cave----looking for Nobody .
旁：Just then a huge figure was moving silently
towards the captain’s house……


After captain King tell the story to his friends. A huge monster suddenly appreared in their room. All the people there were very afraid. Captain King looked for his laser torch , but he couldn't found . Because the torch was in the monster's hand. He destory the torch and eat it .
The monster said: I'm Gork's friend, I'll kill you ,all of you!
Captain King thought and thought .But he couldn't thought anything.


是不是第一句要改成Captain King and his team quickly ran among
the kangaroos .Gork said,

The monster roared . it was very frighting . suddenly the door opened and peters use the new torch to killed him . peters said:"I was shopping just now. When I walked near your house ,I heard something was roared in your house,so I use the laser torch- the birthday present you give me, to killed the monster!'




改成Captain King and his team quickly run among
the kangaroos .Gork say.我认为表演应该用现在进行时，不是过去式

结尾：
When captain King told his story to the reporter. A monster suddenly hopped in hisroom. He laughed and said,'HaHaHa, "Nobody,do you remenber me. I'm gork .My eye iswell.I tell you I will come back.The day I came back, that is, you of death.HaHaHa...."Captain King said,"Don't happy too early,do you forget my laser touch?"But hefound and found,and never find.Gork laughed again,"Preceded the things you will have to have the its device,I think you find this do you want it ,come on."
"peng,"Gork lay down on the ground."Water to pure have no fish, to mean invincible,"captain smile and says.The original he has two laser touch.

还是用这个续集吧！
续集：
旁：Tonight Peter walk in a park near the
captain’s house. Suddenly a dark huger figure quickly through the park. Peter is
very afraid. He shout loudly.
杨：Who are you?
旁：Then the figure appear.
杨“It’s Gork. Why are you here?”
旁：Gork say.
王：Alien, my eye is comeback good. I come back
to catch you. You are finish. All of you.
旁：Peter go back to the captain’s house
immediately and say to the captain King:
杨：Gork is coming. Captain, use your laser
torch to kill Gork.
张：“Oh, where is my laser torch?”
旁：Gork laugh,
王：“Ha, ha. It is in my hands. You can not
hurt me. Nobody, oh no. Captain King, This day next year will be your death
memorial”
旁：Soon, Gork destroy the captain’s house.
They get out of the house.
杨“What do we do?”“Maybe we will really done
for tonight.”
旁：Gork’s claw gradually approach to them. When
they in despair, a lot of shining send to Gork’s eye. Peters and the captain
King open they eyes and see some people use torch to damage Gork’s eye. Gork
roar:
王：Oh my eye, I can’t see anything. Hateful
aliens, You wait here, and I well be back again.
旁：Finally, Gork go back into his spaceship
and fly away. Peters the captain King and other people are very happy.

Part 1
旁：At 2100.Our leading actor—captain king took his team travel
in the space. At once travel. When he is thinking next to where travel. Peters
,our navigator , hastily running into his room and said.
杨:Captain, I lost the way. Maybe we can not go back to
the earth in primary time.
张：And we are running out of food ,so I decided to us in
tonight land on that unexplored planet. I know it is danger. But we must go
there.
旁：Then he say to Lam . Lam is our pilot ,
张:Lam, tonight we need land on that unexplored planet.
杨: No problem
旁 He bring them down gently in a valley close to a
great cliff of smooth ,black rock .In the cliff there were doors ---- each two
storeys high !All of them leave the spaceship and approached the doors
carefully .
杨: Captain, I think it is beautiful.（高兴地）
张:Be careful! I do not think so. Look this door is
open. Let get through it（小心翼翼地进入洞穴）
旁They enter a huge cave ,The furniture inside is similar
to the type on the Earth ,but huge!
杨：Let’s get out of here ,.This is the home of
a monster. Maybe the monster will kill our. Let us go out now!（紧张）
张：It’s clearly partly human ,so it may be a
friendly monster .We’ll wait .
旁：The ground began to shake .The door opened and some
animals hopped in .They looked like kangaroos ,giant kangaroos .Following them
was a huge monster.The kangaroos shouted ,
袋： Good night. Gork
旁and hopped away. The Gork see them .He gave
a roar that turn their blood to ice
王：.Aliens ! Aliens in my cave ! How do you get in here？(愤怒地)
Part 2
旁:He think fast ,and say quietly
张：Good evening ,Mr Gork .My name is Nobody and these
people here are my team numbers. We come from……..
旁：Gork roared again
王：“I know who you are .You ’re aliens and I know
what do you want to do! You want to attack our country. I will catch you and
take you and you team to the police station. Tomorrow morning ,you are going to
die ! All of you !”（再次愤怒）
杨:Let us go out now. He is going to catch us.
旁：Before they could move ,Gork pressed a button on the
wall beside him .Steel bars sprang from the ground around them and closed over
they are heads .We were caught like rats in a trap .
张:Don not fidget, use our gun to kill he. Aim at he! Shoot!（拿出枪支）
旁:Before they shoot. Gork pressed another button ,and a
powerful magnet above the cage pulled our guns from our hands .
杨：“Well Captain ”, “you are wrong about the monster
being friendly ,aren’t you” ?We are done for. And why do you say
your name is “Nobody ”?（疑惑地）
张：“I have a plan and Nobody is part of it ,”.This plan
can help us escape from the cage. You’ll see .
旁:He turn to Gork and say ‘Mr Gork ,it is ture that we
are aliens ,but why can’t we be friends ?Believe me ,sir ,we come in
peace .’Gork say
王：, ‘You come in pieces .why did you want to kill me? Do
not tell a lie.I know you want to attack our country? Tomorrow you’ll
be in pieces .
Peters turned towards me .When he spoke
,his voice shook .
杨：I hope your plan’s a good one ,sir .（颤抖地说）
张：Trust me ,We’re all going to live（坚定地说）

这是终稿
Part 2
旁:He think fast ,and say quietly
张：Good evening ,Mr Gork .My name is Nobody and these
people here are my team numbers. We come from……..（轻声的说）
旁：Gork roared again
王：“I know who you are .You ’re aliens
and I know
what do you want to do! You want to attack our country. I will catch you
andtake you and you team to the police station. Tomorrow morning ,you are going
todie ! All of you !”（语气强烈）
杨:Let us go out now. He is going to catch us.
旁：Before they could move ,Gork pressed a button on the
wall beside him .Steel bars sprang from the ground around them and closed
overthey are heads .We were caught like rats in a trap .
张:Don not fidget, use our gun to kill he. Aim at he!
Shoot!（拿出枪支）
旁:Before they shoot. Gork pressed another button ,and a
powerful magnet above the cage pulled our guns from our hands .
杨：“Well Captain ”, “you are wrong about the monster being friendly ,aren’t you” ?We are done for. And why do you say your
name is “Nobody ”? （疑惑地）
张：“I have a plan and Nobody is part of it ,”.This plan can help us escape from the cage. You’ll see .
旁:He turn to Gork and say.
张：Mr Gork ,it is ture that we are aliens ,but
why can’t we be friends ?Believe me ,sir ,we come
in peace .’
旁：Gork say
王：‘You come in pieces .why did you want to kill me? Do
not tell a lie. I know you want to attack our country. Tomorrow you’ll
be in pieces .
旁：Peters turned towards me .When he spoke ,his voice
shook .
杨：I hope your plan’s a good
one ,sir .(声音颤抖)
张：Trust me ,We’re all
going to live !（拍着他的肩膀自信地说）

Part3
旁：After Gork’s dinner, He
lies down on his bed and falls asleep.
张：“listen, everyone. This is my plan.”（小声的说）
旁：Captain King says and he takes a very small
laser torch from his plastic case ,he says:
张：“Let’s escape by this torch, We will melt the
bars and then ……”
旁：Peters interrupts Captain King
杨：“I know we will use the torch to kill Gork!”
张“Use your brain”“If we
kill Gork , how will we escape . We are too weak to open the door. Here is what
we will do! We’ll ……”
旁：Moments later , we are all out of the
cage.Captain King goes over to the bed and stands over the monsters bed. And
say loudly
张：“Gork , this is Nobody .”
旁：Gork wake up ,Captain King uses the torch to
kills Gork’s eye. Gork roars :
王：“I can’t see! My
eye!.（抱着自己的眼睛）
旁：The noise brings the kangaroos running into
the room.
袋：“what’s wrong ?”
旁：they shout . Gork shouts back
王“Nobody, Nobody attacks me!
袋：Nobody attacks him. He is having a bad
dream. Let’s go back to bed. Good night, Gork.

Part4
旁：Captain King and he team quickly ran among the
kangaroos .Gork said,
王：’Nobody,I know you’re hiding
among my kangaroos I’ll catch you, You’re finished, all of you.
旁：He opened the cave door a little and told his
kangaroos to go out by one ..As they hopp through the door ,he feel their backs
with his hands to make sure they are not riding on them .
杨：What do we do now ? We can’t get out on the kangaroos .We’re done for .He will kill us. I don't want to die
now
张：Don’t panic ,Peters. We can’t get out on the kangaroos but we can get out in them
.Here ,get inside this one .
旁：Peters climbed into the giant kangaroo’s pocket .A few moments later ,he escaped through the
door to freedom .
张：That’s how we all got free, and back to our
spaceship and, finally ,back to the safety of the Earth.
杨：‘What happened to Gork?’
张：Gork? I don’t know
.Maybe he’s still in his cave----looking for Nobody .
旁：Just then a huge figure was moving silently towards
the captain’s house……