Hello everyone.I am very happy to seeing you.
My name is *** .I am junior. I went to this school in 2009 so I have studied two more years English than you at school.
This is your third lesson of spoken english class, I think you are getting along with your English teacher well,she was my spoken English teacher too. She is very good at English especially spoken English ,so you can count on her,and follow her you will speak good excellent English ,
Because I am older than you ,so I would like to share with you my two years of learning experience,and give you some suggestions.

First,I want you to think about a question :how to use your time well, It is very serious. you know everyone have equal time.24hs a day. the man who use his time well ,they can learn more and do better job than others,I wish you wonld not waste your time. Use your time well and study never-ending,you will make a big progress.

Third, let`s talking about learning English.as a student who learn language, my advice would be to spend more time to spend more time to focus on listening skill and spoken English.because, the purpose of language is to communicate. We use English to make friends talk to customers, understand movies,and participate in business meeting. It`s really involves the ability about listening and speaking.

时间过得真快，记得刚上大学的时候，大三的学长学姐们来指导我们的学习，给我们建议，那个时候，觉得他们好厉害，他们的实力很强，各方面都非常棒，一转眼，我们也已经是大三的学生了，对于学生，生活各方面，也颇有心得，轮到我们去给学弟学妹们传授经验了，哈哈，原来世上的事情就是如此，我们不断地努力，不断地前进，原来看似高不可攀的事情，现在也许已经踩在我们的脚下，成为我们进步的台阶。每当看到那些功成名的人站在台上挥洒自如的讲话，我想，也许当我到了那个年纪，有了那样的阅历，那样的经验，我也会做的更好，那么，现在我所需要做的就是不断地努力！

谢谢，有几个地方改的比原来的好多了，当时没想到！

Therefore
efficiently
definitely
这三个词用的太好了，哎呀，我的积极词汇太少了，写的时候居然想不起来这些词！
谢谢~~