同意12楼所说的放照片的顺序，先吸引大家目光，引人入胜，再慢慢细化，引人深思。另外还可以放几张爱心活动的照片，告诉大家这样一个大明星在一直默默无闻地做着公益事业。
建议不要用太难的词汇，演讲的目的除了展示自己的风采，还得要大家都听得懂才行！
这是一个很好的机会，楼主加油啊！期待你的好消息！
建议不要用太难的词汇，演讲的目的除了展示自己的风采，还得要大家都听得懂才行！
这是一个很好的机会，楼主加油啊！期待你的好消息！
初稿如下。我不确定的地方都打括号了，希望有亲可以解答。如果还有语法错误或是与事实不太符合，请指出，我好修改。总之，希望各位亲多提意见，谢谢。
Today I will introduce you my icon. He is Vincent Chiao, a famous actor from Taiwan. I first saw him on TV in 1999, he acted as 李寻欢 in 小李飞刀（求官方翻译）. His curly hair and graceful action left a deep impress in my mind. He plays the part of swordsman in many magnificent dramas on the screen, which attracts people of all ages. I love him not only for his handsome appearance, but also for his kindness, the respect of the acting career and considerance. He takes care of his relatives, colleagues, as well as his fans.
He so cares his parents so much that he still spared some time to bring his mother to her homeland during his worktime in 2008(我有没有记错?). He is also humorous and gets along well with his colleagues. He appeals that not only his fans but also all people take more care about those people who are in trouble. He makes great contributions to charity. Once his fans hold an online meeting till midnight. To their surprise, after a day’s hard work, he still want online only to tell them to rest more. He views his fans as his relatives, which moved us all. Although we fans, are from all over the world, when we are together, with Chiao, we feel like a big family, filled with happiness and harmonious.
In my real life, I like the person like him, modest, gentle and elegant(谁能告诉我这三个能不能全用形容词).
Finally I will use a poem to finish my speech.
What a pity! I am yet to exist - when you were born
fortunately - you are still handsome, age only adorns
I hope not - that I am by your side - each day and night
the heart wishes only - for your happiness and delight.
(本诗摘自海天姐的英语焦学)
还有求表哥图一张（最好是P过的），老大做公益事业的图一张。
Today I will introduce you my icon. He is Vincent Chiao, a famous actor from Taiwan. I first saw him on TV in 1999, he acted as 李寻欢 in 小李飞刀（求官方翻译）. His curly hair and graceful action left a deep impress in my mind. He plays the part of swordsman in many magnificent dramas on the screen, which attracts people of all ages. I love him not only for his handsome appearance, but also for his kindness, the respect of the acting career and considerance. He takes care of his relatives, colleagues, as well as his fans.
He so cares his parents so much that he still spared some time to bring his mother to her homeland during his worktime in 2008(我有没有记错?). He is also humorous and gets along well with his colleagues. He appeals that not only his fans but also all people take more care about those people who are in trouble. He makes great contributions to charity. Once his fans hold an online meeting till midnight. To their surprise, after a day’s hard work, he still want online only to tell them to rest more. He views his fans as his relatives, which moved us all. Although we fans, are from all over the world, when we are together, with Chiao, we feel like a big family, filled with happiness and harmonious.
In my real life, I like the person like him, modest, gentle and elegant(谁能告诉我这三个能不能全用形容词).
Finally I will use a poem to finish my speech.
What a pity! I am yet to exist - when you were born
fortunately - you are still handsome, age only adorns
I hope not - that I am by your side - each day and night
the heart wishes only - for your happiness and delight.
(本诗摘自海天姐的英语焦学)
还有求表哥图一张（最好是P过的），老大做公益事业的图一张。
