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可以帮我改改英语作文吗?我是初三学生

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1楼2010-10-03 18:41回复
    Dear Paul,
        It absolutely changed a lot this year that my life became much different. When I was in junior 2, I used to have so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted. Now I am junior 3, I almost can’t play anymore because of the big pressure from parents and teachers. I also had less homework before. Instead, there’s plenty of homework to do everyday and I don’t go to bed until 11:00 p.m. It causes that I nearly fall asleep in class the next day. I am not allowed to go to movies either, my mom told me it’s extremely necessary to concentrate on study, only study! I have no chance to think about something entertaining! How disgusting! It’s impossible for me to live normally under such a terrible condition, and then I communicated with Ms. Lee, my English teacher. She’s patient and said that this year is crucial for us in order to make life easier. Later I realized the importance and I am much optimistic now. She’s right, the boring score will decide which high school you should study in. What’s more, perhaps it will determine your job and your lifetime. In a word, there’s an old saying that “No pains, no gains”, I am going to study hard and I believe I will control my future.
    Tom
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    要求写回信来着,我英语不太好,初三的。
    可以给我提提意见吗,哈哈,写得有点随心所欲了。
    谢谢大家了


    2楼2010-10-03 18:42
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      IP属地:山东3楼2010-10-03 19:04
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        没错。。哈哈
        所以求改呢


        4楼2010-10-03 19:36
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          Dear Paul,
          There no doubt that my life have changed a lot this year. When I was a grade 2 student, I had so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted to do. Now I am a grade 3 student, I almost can’t play because of the pressure from parents and teachers. I also had a little homework before. Instead, there’s plenty of homework to do everyday and I can't go to bed until 11:00 p.m.
          我要学习去了
          没时间帮你改后面的


          5楼2010-10-03 20:20
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            我上面貌似也错了几个
            There 后面加个s


            6楼2010-10-03 20:23
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              谢谢啦
              我去改改


              7楼2010-10-03 20:24
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