回复：【短篇】那些少年路过爱（以潘西为第一人称）英汉双译

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Ron sighed and rubbed her hair and whispered: "Hermione good ah, do not cry on, we had the ugly cry at night the nightmares of others. You see, 咱 although rejected in love, but must also have civic-minded is not it? "
Tears shabu's what they charged back, Granger Ron looked carpal dig a heart, said something fiercely: "Rolling."
See here, you may think, followed by Granger with Ron's story. In fact, when everyone around him so that even I hope so.
I am a Ron current girlfriend, Pansy.
That is to see Granger N times in her first confession in the afternoon, affectionate, and she was invited to the office to drink tea, I go and get something Professor McGonagall.
Granger very good very good results, which is why teachers are so tolerate his reasons.
Good afternoon sun, while I get something while listening to Professor McGonagall a very cold and said: "Granger, you have no shame,, and actually ran up the roof again and again to shout at large call, you, you give me Xiejian Tao, five inches, not tomorrow, I really pay up to their own points of college. "
Having to go out, I looked up and saw Professor McGonagall opened her drawer, turned up.
"What are you doing?", Could not say anything, Granger was startled, then turned and smiled at me: "Hush, Hush, I'm looking for my previous criticism Text, she would not found. "
So I watched Granger pulls out a criticism Text, above Sasa ocean are bitter words of repentance.
Well ...... the power of love really so big? Granger past is not the case ...... ......

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膜拜一下。
做地板。

英汉双译……太强悍了！！！！！！！！！！！
我喜欢这文风！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

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同志们
今天是再更一点
还是明天再更？

话说，楼主，这真的是你翻译的么……
英语很多地方都不通顺阿……单词用的很生硬，不过一些宾从和伴随状语还不错。
However, only Granger can be so unscrupulous, who face the risk of points every week roared a deep feeling confession.
这个定从句里，前半句和你的原文根本不是一个意思阿，can be so unscrupulous——能够如此不择手段？
…………我也英语无能，说错了别拍我。灰过。当我打个酱油。

嗯嗯、我喜欢 这文风~~

不好意思
本人英语也是一般
有些单词是查的啊

我对不起你们
刚才没上号

我的英语其实很一般
无能
但硬撑
唉...
自卑的飘过
要是英语能有矢车菊同学那么好就好了

更了啊

接着她拿起笔纸，写了几个字之后，苦恼地问我：“美人儿，情书怎么弄？”
“情书？”我愣了一下，翻出一份情书，“这个情书写的不错，你摘抄点那个女生深情表白的话语，改改应该可以吧。”
格兰杰感激地接过去，一丝不苟地抄了起来。
如果我早知道格兰杰的情书写的那么差，我真的不该给她抄的，我宁愿帮她写一份。第二天看到公告栏贴着署名格兰杰的情书时，我的第一感觉是，我真作孽。
那篇情书的精华部分被人用红笔勾了出来，上面是整整一排的排比句：啊，马尔福，你就是冬天的康乃馨，散发着迷人的芬芳；啊，马尔福，你就是海里的海马，永远那么特立独行；啊，马尔福，你是我的洗衣机，为我遮风挡雨......
旁边用红笔批注着：不知所云。
那是德拉科的笔迹。我顿时有点火大。德拉科这次做的太过分了，就算格兰杰再怎么缠着他，她好歹是个女生，这样把情书贴在公告栏里面，让格兰杰怎么见人。
我伸出手，准备把那封情书撕下来的时候，一只手抢在我的前面，唰地揭了下来。抬起头，就看见罗恩愤怒的眼神。

Then she took the pen paper, wrote a few words, the distress and asked me: "honey child, how get love?"
"Love?" I stunned a little, pulls out a love letter, "the situation of writing a good, affectionate girl that you extract confession point words, change should be able to change it."
Granger gratefully received in the past, meticulously copied them.
If I had known Granger's love of writing is so bad, I really should not give her copy, I would rather help her write a. See the bulletin board the next day close to Granger's love letter signed, my first feeling is, I really sin.
Essence of some thing I read a love letter in red hook was out of the top row of the alignment is a whole sentence: ah, Malfoy, you're the carnation in winter, the fragrance exudes charm; ah, Malfoy, you are the sea hippocampus, will always have the maverick; ah, Malfoy, you are my washing machine, for me shelter ......
Red pen next to comments with: unintelligible.
It was Draco's handwriting. I am suddenly a bit Greatest Fire. Draco to do too much this time, even if the Granger no matter how pestering him, she was a girl, whatever the outcome, so love letter posted on the bulletin board inside, so people see how Granger.
I held out my hand, ready to put the love letters, when torn, a hand grab in front of me, shabu to expose down. Looked up and saw Ron angry eyes.