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HEART STEARL--偷心者
Preface
I’m moving, moving from all my friends, my schoolmates and my neighbors. I just have to move because I hurt my best friend and her boyfriend, in fact is my boyfriend hurt me. I just want to move to a new place. I don’t expect for much, I just hope I can make a lot of new friends, it doesn’t matter is I will have a boyfriend. If I have a boyfriend, I really don’t hope my boyfriend is my friend’s boyfriend! But I’m wrong…
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1楼2010-07-01 18:58回复
    CHARTER ONE—BREAKING UP
    “Crystal, I can’t believe it!” a voice broke the peaceful.
    “Jas. I didn’t mean it!” my voice broke in.
    “SHUT-UP!”
    “Hey! What do you said to her!!” a boy’s voice yelled.
    “Shut-up Robert” I shouted.
    “Hey, hon. it is ok! I can handle this!” Robert whispered loud and tried to kiss me.
    “STOP!! Robert!!” I pushed him away and shouted.
    “Tell me, Rob. Who do love better!! Tell me!! Tell her!! Who is your valentine?” Jasmine shouted. Her tears dropped down from her face.
    “Of course is my dear Crystal! You are so stupid! Now would you please get out of the way?” Robert put his arm around me and pushed Jasmine away.
    “How dare are you! Crystal, I can’t believe it! Although you are pretty, but how can you steal my boyfriend? I hate you! I can’t believe we will become best friends!!” Jasmine cried loud.
    “I’m sorry, Jas. I didn’t mean…!” I pushed Robert away. I cried too and tried to hug Jasmine. But she just moved away.
    “Ahhhhhh! Shut up! I don’t want to hear anything now! Just go away!” Jasmine covered her ears and ran away!
    “Jasmine! I didn’t mean it! I am sorry!! Come back, please!” I yelled, tried to twist that moment, but it was too late.
    “Come on, hon. let’s go watch the movie now!” Robert said and kissed my face. But I just let my tears dropped.
    “Shut up! Robert! You make me lose my best friend! But you even don’t carried! Have you even loved me for really before? I ‘m breaking up with you!” I yelled and ran away, tears drop!
    That’s why I decide to move!
      
    


    2楼2010-07-01 18:59
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      CHARTER Two—Thinking
           I told my parents the whole thing, but they just… you know. So I decided to move by myself because my parents can’t give up their job.
      I moved to John Burlet High School, I going to spent my last year of high school in Vancouver with tone of the strangers.
      I really don’t want to move, but I have to. I can’t hurt Jasmine again and I can’t let Robert hurt Jasmine and me again. I cried everyday, I used tears to wash my pain, but it was worst. No matter what, I am alone now again, a friendless loser, a friendless heart stealer. I am really repent that I dated with Robert, if I just said no to him, Jasmine will still be my best friend and I will still stay with my friends, my schoolmate and my neighbors. I can feel my heart was burning everyday, my heart was crying, just like me.
      I want summer to be over faster, then I can go to new school, to meet new friends and I can forget everything about Jasmine, Robert and me. But I was wrong again.
      


      3楼2010-07-01 19:01
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        不前只有那么多了,后面的还没想好,不过大概意思也成为了第三者,主要描写少男少女之间还没成熟的爱情!!!


        4楼2010-07-01 19:03
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          怎么没人啊???


          5楼2010-07-01 20:58
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            英语不好。看不懂,,没棒法帮你;额


            6楼2010-07-01 22:03
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              我辛辛苦苦写的文啊!潜下去了!哭!


              7楼2010-07-02 16:38
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                不过没有6l的回复,可能潜的更快!谢了!


                8楼2010-07-02 16:40
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                  帅,竟然用英语写?


                  9楼2010-07-02 17:39
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                    潜的好快啊!!!


                    10楼2010-07-03 20:33
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                      不发表任何意见


                      IP属地:福建11楼2010-07-03 20:46
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                        不要啊!!!有人看明白吗?还是我写得太烂了???


                        12楼2010-07-04 15:33
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                          好厉害哦!!看不懂!! DDD


                          14楼2010-07-11 19:27
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                            15楼2010-07-11 19:27
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                              16楼2010-07-11 19:27
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