下班回家进厨房,
                                       吃完晚饭就上床,
                                                    领了工资存银行,
                                                                  出门最远到商场,
                                                                                 一生只上一张床.
       整改方案:
                       下班可以不回家,
                                  几点上床由着她,
                                                 领了工资自己花,
                                                                想到哪花到哪花,
                                                                             随心所欲披婚纱.