finish your studies in abroad .for one reason ,what you are studying is bad needed nowadays in china .it will be quiet easy for 

you to find a good job .as a matter of fact i know that a little big companies in our city hopes to hire people like you  

for another reason ,i think you will be much more convenient to look your parents as they are getting old ,

so i think it is a good idea for you to return .so what are you waiting for ?

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i am very glad to receive your letter two weeks ago .i have been thinking over your career after your complete your studies abroad . i suggest you find a job and stay in china.firstly, what you are studying is badly needed in china   nowadays.therefore it will be quite easy for you to find a good job after your graduate.in fact i‘ve heard that some small companies,even big companies, in our city are willing to hire some employees just like you   .secondly,if you work here, i think it will be more convenient for you to take care of your parents when they are getting old .so i believe it is a good idea for you to return our country.come on, what are you waiting for ?
这是楼主自己写的文章么？？

这是个改错文...

回复：11楼
汗一个，改错文？？未免也错的太多了吧，我以为是你写的作文，大刀阔斧地改了。。54我改的吧。。

12楼.有10个左右

12楼.有10个左右

回复：14楼
晕死，打死都不信这是改错题。。。错的太离谱了鸟。。。