14Ltime后加To

你去查下字典....
season 是 季节...
autumn 是 秋季...
不是打击楼主 真的该不过来.....

为什么要加to....
你想表达什么....

He and I started a nod to the day after the trip.....
你想表达什么?

谁能帮咱改改

     炎热的夏天已经刚过,这是秋天的季节。上星期我陪先生布朗游览了长城,他似乎参观长城是第一次,引导、蒙罗维纳的袋子。他和我开始点头后的第二天,这次旅行。首先,我们已经发布了,并合影留念的道路上,我帮他拍很多照片。然后我们休息上的吸引力增加水分。在这一点上,我们发现一个签名活动,称为“保护环境是每个人的责任,我们参加了它。签约后,他的名字写在这张纸上,我们将继续前进,但突然有点小女孩把红色的围巾阻止我们,”这个包是你的吗?,"她说。然后我们意识到包不是先生布朗,他十分感动。他向那个小女孩因为这事,说再见。
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19L你自己看看你打的句子。应该是first time to visit.

可惜所有的语法都有错误

-0-等等啊
我再改改

Heat of the summer has just passed, it is autumn. Last week I accompanied Mr.Brown toured the Great Wall,and he was the first time to visit the Great Wall.And he held a guidebook,carried a package.I greeted him by word to the day before the trip. First, we upclimbed the Great Wall , and posed for pictures on the Great Wall, I took a lot of pictures of him and the beautiful sights. Then we rested on the side of the Great Wall to add moisture. At this moment, we found a signature event, called "Care for the environment is everybody's responsibility",and we took part in it. After writed our names on the paper,we continued to move forward, but suddenly a little girl tied a red scarf stopped us, "This package is yours?
, "She said. Then we found the package of Mr.Brown had gone, so he was very moved. He thanked the little girl for this thing and said goodbye to her.
Through this incident take me realize the pleasure in helping others is a very good thing.
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