Dies Irae
震怒之日
OYEZ! OYEZ!
嘿!嘿!
THIS IS A GALA EVENING!
这是个欢庆的夜晚！
VEILED ANGELS
戴着面纱的天使们
CROWD THE THEATRE
挤满了剧院
TO SEE A PLAY
是为了观看一台
OF HOPES AND FEARS.
关于希望和恐惧的演出．
MOTLEY MIMES
默剧的小丑
TOSS ABOUT THE SCENE
由细线撑着
HELD UP BY THREADS
在舞台上游走
SINKING IN THE DEEP.
接着坠入深处．
ONSTAGE
舞台之上
IN A CORNER
角落之中
HIDDEN BEHIND MYSELF
隐藏起我自己
I HOLD MY BREATH:
我屏住自己的呼吸：
IN THE AIRLESS AIR
在闷热的空气里
SHARDS OF CRUSHED RAINBOWS
幻想的碎片
FILL MY LIMBO,
填满了我内心深处
PLACED SOMEWHERE
被放置在
BETWEEN WORLD AND TOYS.
真实世界与玩具之间
"DO YOU WANT TO PLAY WITH ME?"
”你想和我一起玩吗？”
IN THE SOUNDTRACK OF MY SURVIVAL
我幸存的声线发出
THE FURIOUS SMALL HAMMERS
那些狂暴的小锤
FULLY UPROOTED
从他们钥匙形的
FROM THEIR KEY-SHAPED
被全部
SKELETON
拔出
CRUELLY EXPLORE
残忍的探察
EVERY CRANIAL PATH
每条颅骨的线型
ALWAYS CLOSER...
愈是靠近．．．
ALWAYS MORE PAINFUL!
就愈是疼痛！


THE SHARKS' FIN
鲨鱼的鳍
IS SIGHTING STRAIGHT FOR ME:
在我看来是直线形的：
CREATURES OR SPIRITS
实体或魂魄
I BEG YOU!
我乞求你！
MAYBE IT'S THE DELIRIUM
可能这是我患病理智
OF MY MORBID RATIO
的胡言乱语
OR THAT VOICE THAT LIES
那声音那谎言
DEEP IN MY INTIMATE SELF
深深扎入我的内心
TO ALLOW THIS SWIMMING
容许这个游物
THROUGH THE LYMPHS OF VICTIMS
穿过患病者的淋巴
WHILE DARK REIGNS OVER
当黑暗的统治盛行
THE SONS OF PUTREFACTION!
腐烂之歌！
FATHER OF SONS ALL DEFORMED
所有孩子的父亲都变了形
THAT LIKE A GHASTLY STREAM
就像是一条苍白的河流
SURGE OUT
浪腾汹涌
THROUGH THE RUSTED GATES OF TIME
穿过时间锈掉的大门
-A DEAF DUMB EYELESS THRONG
－一群失语失聪失明的人
LAUGHING FOREVER
永远都在大笑
BUT SMILING NO MORE
但不再微笑了
THE GOD ABSENT.
上帝未存在．
OR STILL.
或是沉默．


"HAEC VERBA AUDI: VITAM AETERNAM!"
那些言语说着：生命永存！
LIKE THE SHAMAN
就像是萨满
WHO INGRATIATES HIMSELF
把捕到猎物的
WITH THE DEITY
神格
OF THE ANIMAL HE HUNTS
献给自己
SEEKING POSSESSION
寻找猎物
WITH THE SPIRIT OF THE BEAST:
凭借野兽特有的精魂
SO THE INNOCENTS,
因此那些无辜者，
PERVADED WITH THE SPIRIT
被伟大猎捕者
OF THE GREAT PREDATOR
的精神力量所包围
-PRINCEPS HUIUS MUNDI-
THOUGH BURNT ON OUR PYRES
虽然我们火葬的柴堆已点燃
WILL TRANSCEND TIME
但我们会超越时间
SOARING OVER
高翔于
PHYSICAL EXTINCTION.
物质的毁灭之上．
DOMINE TE VOCO
你，上帝的神圣声音呼唤着
IUSTUM MIHI OSTENDE UNICUM
伸张出正义，向我展现了力量
TALIS MONSTRIS OB SPECTACULUM
因为那些无尽的考验
STUPEFACTUS EGO MORIAR...
我将毫无意义地死去
...ON MEURT A MOINS!
除非我们都死！

HOOKED HANDS
钩状的手掌
STRETCHED OUT ABOVE
伸展开来
IN THE ULTIMATE ENDEAVOUR
极尽努力之下
TO CLUTCH AN ATOM
去抓住那
THAT DOES NOT SINK.
不会溜走的微粒．
IN THE DAY OF WRATH
在震怒之日
THE HUNGRY MARIONETTES
饥饿的木偶
WAKE UP - COME ALIVE
苏醒-重生
WHILE BIRDS OF SOUL
当灵魂之鸟
USHER IN
领来
THE RAYS OF CHAOS..
混乱时代的光芒．．
"FATAL INFECTION... FAR ALL!
”致命的恶疾．．．．蔓延万地！
EPIDEMY! EPIDEMY!"
蔓延！蔓延！”
DIES IRAE!
震怒之日！


FEEDING ON FRAGMENTS OF GANGRENE
以坏疽
TEETH CRUMBLE
的碎片为食
TOES FALL APART.
脚趾瓦解,
WE CRAWL LIKE EARTH-WORMS
我们只能像蚯蚓一样爬行
THAT RATS AND BIRDS FIGHT OVER.
而老鼠与飞鸟为此争斗．
SCORED BY SILENCE
终归沉寂
SPIRITS CREEP
那灵魂潜行在
OUT OF THE SECRET NOOKS:
秘密的角落：
SCATTER IN THE STREETS
散落在大街上
EACH ONE
每个人
CHOOSING HIS OWN
挑选着他
BELOVED PREY.
所钟爱的猎物．
AMONG THE TREES,
树林之上
HOLDING HER OUT MY HANDS
向她伸出我的手
"WHAT ABOUT A WALK?"
”去散步怎么样？”
I AVOID THE SHARP SPLINTERS
我避开她甜蜜而又震惊的眼神中
OF HER SWEET SHATTERED GAZE.
的尖利的碎片.
STEP BY STEP
一步接一步
INTO THE LABYRINTHS OF DOUBT
踏进了怀疑的迷宫
EVERY SHELTER: A TRAP.
每个落脚点都是：一个陷阱．
WHILE DISTRESSES I WITNESS
然而我所目睹的悲痛
THE TWILIGHT OF MY HEART
都会微微照明我的心灵
YOU SPREAD AROUND DROPS OF LIGHT
你散布在下垂的光线里
UNAWARE OF THE RUSTLE
无形之中
OF INVISIBLE SYLLABLES:
突然放出话语：
"YOU WILL NOT GET OUT
”你将逃不出
OF ETERNAL PEACE!"
这永世的安宁！”
AND THE VIRGIN BLADE KISSES,
而未曾开锋的刀片的亲吻
-FREEING-
解放了
YOUR WHITE THROAT.
你白色的喉咙.


IN THE PURPLE FLASHES
在炽烈血液
OF THE BLAZING BLOOD
紫红色的光辉中
SLOWLY WE VANISH
在我们自身周围和内部
IN AND AROUND OURSELVES.
我们慢慢消散
CELLS OF SPIRIT DISSOLVE
灵魂的细胞一点又一点
BIT BY BIT...
逐渐消散．．．
"YOU WILL NOT GET OUT OF ETERNAL PEACE!
”你将逃不出这永世的宁静
YOU WILL NOT GET OUT OF ETERNAL PEACE!"
你将逃不出这永世的宁静
SUDDENLY THE VOlD
突然其来的空虚
FILLS YOUR FIRST BORN
填满了你的首次诞生
VIBRATION.
震动．
JUST THE STILL SPLENDOUR
不过是你冰冷守护的忍耐
OF YOUR ICY WARDS ENDURES.
的沉寂的余辉
I SEE YOU THROUGH MY TEARS,
我见你穿越我的泪水，
TEARS THAT NOBODY EVER WILL DRY...
这泪水没人能擦干．．．
"YOU WILL NOT GET OUT OF ETERNAL PEACE!
”你将逃不出这永世的安宁
YOU WILL NOT GET OUT OF ETERNAL
你将逃不出永恒的PEACE/KILL/SLEEP/MURDER/DEATH.
宁静／杀戮／沉睡／谋杀／死亡．


THE LAST WORD OF MY SCRIPT
我剧本的最后一句话语
IS NOW DECLAIMED.
正是此时的宣言．
TIME IS OVER,
时间已经完结，
AND THERE'S NO WHISPERING PROMPTER
这儿没有了低语的题词员
TO EASE MY SCENIC SOLITUDE.
来释解我舞台上的孤独．
THE CRAWLING SHAPE INTRUDES
这爬行入侵者
AND WHILE I OPEN MY ARMS
在我张开臂膀之时
IT SEIZES ME IN ITS JAWS!
将我抓入它的嘴中！
"THIS IS MY BODY, WHICH IS SACRIFICED FOR YOU!"
”这是我的躯体，献给你！”
("INTO THY HANDS I COMMEND MY SPIRIT...")
”进入你的手中我便交付自己的灵魂．．．”）
OUT. OUT ARE THE LIGHTS. OUT ALL.
熄灭，熄灭灯光，熄灭所有．
AND OVER EACH QUIVERING FORM
每一次幕布的下落
THE CURTAIN COMES DOWN
的震动
LIKE A FUNERAL PALL.
如一张裹尸布．
WITH A RUSH OF STORM,
急风暴雨般下落．
WHILE ANGELS
当天使们
-PALE AND SILENT-
RISING AND UNVEILING
除去面纱并升起
AFFIRM
断言
THAT WE ARE WITNESSING
我们正在观看
THE TRAGEDY
一出悲剧
"MAN"
”人”
AND ITS HERO IS....
它的主角便是那．．．
THE CONQUEROR WORM.
爬行入侵者．


YET I WOULD LOSE NO STING
我已失去不了痛苦
WOULD WISH NO TORTURE LESS;
不能希望受到的痛苦更少；
THE MORE THAT ANGUISH RACKS
受到的痛苦折磨越多
THE EARLIER IT WILL BLESS.
便能越早变得圣洁．
AND ROBED IN FIRES OF HELL
盗取地狱的火焰
OR BRIGHT IN HEAVENLY SHINE,
或带来天国的光芒，
IF IT BUT HERALD DEATH
如果那样即宣告了死亡
THE VISION IS DIVINE.
那眼前的景色便是神圣的．
THE STILL LOOK
平静的神态
CURLED UP IN THE STRAIT-JACKET.
卷身在紧身夹克里．
FADING OF TEARS.
眼泪的凋谢．
BEHIND EVERY KISS:
每一个吻背后：
A POTENTIAL JUDAS.
都有一个潜藏的犹太人．
DESIRE OF BITING
尖锐的愿望
THE VITAL ARTERY
我生命的
MINE
动脉
OR OF THE FIRST PASSER-BY
第一个路过的渺小人物
INSECTS WITH LEGS
有脚的昆虫
TORN OFF
将我的指甲
MY NAILS ONE BY ONE
一个接一个的扯下
SHARDS OF GLASS
玻璃的碎片
IN EYES OF CAT
在猫的眼睛看来
SMILE. OR SIMPLY: IVORY.
是微笑．或者简单说：是象牙．
GOOD NIGHT.
晚安．
PLUG DISCONNECTED.
插头断开．
SOME FLOWERS
一些花朵
IN THE FIRST MONTH
会出现在第一个月里
THEN JUST:
接下来却仅有：
EARTH.
尘土．


注解1:整个故事的整体框架源于POE的诗作:
The Conqueror Worm - E.A. Poe 1843
     征服者爬虫
                                   曹明伦   译
Lo! 'tis a gala night
瞧！这是个喜庆的夜晚
Within the lonesome latter years!
在最近这些寂寞的年头！
An angel throng, bewinged, bedight
一群天使，收拢翅膀，
In veils, and drowned in tears,
遮好面纱，掩住泪流
Sit in a theatre, to see
坐在剧场，观看一出
A play of hopes and fears,
希望与恐怖之剧，
While the orchestra breathes fitfully
此时乐队间间断断
The music of the spheres.
奏着天外之曲．
Mimes, in the form of God on high,
装扮成上帝的一群小丑，
Mutter and mumble low,
叽叽咕咕，自言自语，
And hither and thither fly-
从舞台这头飞到那头－
Mere puppets they, who come and go
他们全是木偶，来来去去
At bidding of vast formless things
全由许多无形物支配，
That shift the scenery to and fro,
无形物不断把场景变换，
Flapping from out their Condor wings
从他们秃鹰的翅膀内
Invisible Woe!
拍出看不见的灾难！
That motley drama- oh, be sure
那出杂剧－哦，强相信
It shall not be forgot!
将不会被人遗忘！
With its Phantom chased for evermore,
因为它那被抓不住它的人，
By a crowd that seize it not,
永远在追求的幻想，
Through a circle that ever returneth in
因为一个永远旋转的怪圈
To the self-same spot,
最后总是转回原处，
And much of Madness, and more of Sin,
因为情节之灵魂总是罪恶，
And Horror the soul of the plot.
充满疯狂，充满恐怖．
But see, amid the mimic rout
可看呀，就在那群小丑之中
A crawling shape intrude!
闯进了一个蠕动的动物！
A blood-red thing that writhes from out
那可怕的怪物浑身血红
The scenic solitude!
从舞台角落扭动而出！
It writhes!- it writhes!- with mortal pangs
它扭动！－扭动！－真是可怕
The mimes become its food,
小丑都成了它的美餐，
And seraphs sob at vermin fangs
天使们呜咽，见爬虫毒牙
In human gore imbued.
正把淋淋人血侵染．
Out- out are the lights- out all!
熄灭－熄灭－熄灭灯光！
And, over each quivering form,
罩住每一个哆嗦的影子，
The curtain, a funeral pall,
大幕像一快裹尸布一样，
Comes down with the rush of a storm,
愤然落下像暴风昼雨，
While the angels, all pallid and wan,
这时脸色苍白的天使，
Uprising, unveiling, affirm
摘下面纱，起身，肯定
That the play is the tragedy, "Man,"
这是一幕叫做＜人＞的悲剧
And its hero the Conqueror Worm.
而主角色正是那征服者爬虫．
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注解二:歌词中
:A DEAF DUMB EYELESS THRONG
－群失语失聪失明的人
LAUGHING FOREVER
     永远都在大笑
BUT SMILING NO MORE
     但不再微笑了
应是出自波德莱尔诗作<自惩者>的:
我是我心的吸血鬼,
---伟大的被弃者之一,
已被判处大笑不止,
却再不能微笑一回!


注解三:
<Dies Irae>中的音乐部分:
ONCE UPON A TIME
       从前
       THERE WAS A PRETTY FLY,
       这里有一只漂亮的苍蝇，
       HE HAD A PRETTY WIFE,
       他有一个漂亮的妻子，
       THIS PRETTY FLY,
       这只漂亮的苍蝇，
       BUT ONE DAY SHE FLEW AWAY,FLEW AWAY.
       但是有一天她飞走了.飞走了.
       SHE HAD TWO PRETTY CHILDREN
       她有两个漂亮的孩子
       BUT ONE NIGHT THESE TWO PRETTY CHILDREN
       但是有一天晚上这两个漂亮的孩子
       FLEW AWAY,FLEW AWAY,INTO THE SKY,INTO THE...
       飞走了,飞走了,飞进了天空,飞进了...
这段来自电影The Night of the Hunter，
http://www.douban.com/subject/1293582/?i=0
原文是FLEW AWAY,FLEW AWAY,INTO THE SKY,INTO THE MOON  

注解4:歌词中被反复重复的一句:"EACH MAN KILLS THE THING HE LOVES!"应来自于王尔德的<雷丁监狱之歌>:
Yet each man kills the thing he loves
By each let this be heard,
Some do it with a bitter look,
Some with a flattering word,
The coward does it with a kiss,
The brave man with a sword!
人人都杀心爱的人儿，
愿这话人人能听见。
有人是用难看的脸色，
有人是用蜜语和甜言，
怯懦的胆小鬼用亲吻，
勇敢的人才用刀剑！


注解5:
<Dies Irae>中的:
YET I WOULD LOSE NO STING
WOULD WISH NO TORTURE LESS;
THE MORE THAT ANGUISH RACKS
AND ROBED IN FIRES OF HELL
OR BRIGHT IN HEAVENLY SHINE,
IF IT BUT HERALD DEATH
THE VISION IS DIVINE.
来自于艾米丽勃朗特的<囚徒>(对,就是那部启发The girl who was death...的连续剧的同名作)中的最后一节:
The Prisoner
Emily Bronte. 1818-1848
STILL let my tyrants know, I am not doom'd to wear
Year after year in gloom and desolate despair;
A messenger of Hope comes every night to me,
And offers for short life, eternal liberty.
He comes with Western winds, with evening's wandering airs,
With that clear dusk of heaven that brings the thickest stars:
Winds take a pensive tone, and stars a tender fire,
And visions rise, and change, that kill me with desire.
Desire for nothing known in my maturer years,
When Joy grew mad with awe, at counting future tears:
When, if my spirit's sky was full of flashes warm,
I knew not whence they came, from sun or thunder-storm.
But first, a hush of peace--a soundless calm descends;
The struggle of distress and fierce impatience ends.
Mute music soothes my breast--unutter'd harmony
That I could never dream, till Earth was lost to me.
Then dawns the Invisible; the Unseen its truth reveals;
My outward sense is gone, my inward essence feels;
Its wings are almost free--its home, its harbour found,
Measuring the gulf, it stoops, and dares the final bound.
O dreadful is the check--intense the agony--
When the ear begins to hear, and the eye begins to see;
When the pulse begins to throb--the brain to think again--
The soul to feel the flesh, and the flesh to feel the chain.
Yet I would lose no sting, would wish no torture less;
The more that anguish racks, the earlier it will bless;
And robed in fires of hell, or bright with heavenly shine,
If it but herald Death, the vision is divine.


恩,花落同学指出的直切重点啊，这是我翻译最差的地方,当初MYY也给我指出过:),在这点上MYY的翻译做的相当棒,所以我一直期待她DIES IRAE的翻译.
这片翻译真的相当差,各种层面上,所以本不愿意拿出来现眼的。
当时翻译DD是曾经放弃过一段时间的,心里想着是等自己有足够的知识储备再去动的，最近不知道怎么又动了起来，真是手贱啊>_<