这周开始练作文，虽然为时已晚，但本人不怕苦，还望各路好汉可以从立意、句法、语法、词汇替换等角度指点迷津！是98年的英一大作文，贴图：
In the vivid picture, a hen standing on her nest-box is holding a high-sounding promise that her eggs are all round with eggshells, egg whites as well as yolk. Nearby there exists a poem that directly discloses the unhealthy ways and customs throughout the society at present—empty promise.
How does it concretely manifests？As the comic reflects, promising the quality of commodities is the basic duty of manufacturers instead of excessively depending on external supervision. Whereas, to chase fame and fortune, vicious merchants still not merely utilize gorgeous advertisements to sell inferior products but provide the goods that they practically can not do to make a profit. How annoying it is!
Therefore, people from all walks of life should settle the chronic problem shoulder to shoulder. On one hand, manufacturers must hold themselves liable for what they produce. As an old saying puts it,"Honesty is the best policy". Without creating a sincere environment of the transaction, none can survive everlastingly. On the other hand, the correlative laws should be laid down and put into effect by the government to ensure a benign trading environment of the marketplace. Only in this way can we protect our benefit from being damaged.
In the vivid picture, a hen standing on her nest-box is holding a high-sounding promise that her eggs are all round with eggshells, egg whites as well as yolk. Nearby there exists a poem that directly discloses the unhealthy ways and customs throughout the society at present—empty promise.
How does it concretely manifests？As the comic reflects, promising the quality of commodities is the basic duty of manufacturers instead of excessively depending on external supervision. Whereas, to chase fame and fortune, vicious merchants still not merely utilize gorgeous advertisements to sell inferior products but provide the goods that they practically can not do to make a profit. How annoying it is!
Therefore, people from all walks of life should settle the chronic problem shoulder to shoulder. On one hand, manufacturers must hold themselves liable for what they produce. As an old saying puts it,"Honesty is the best policy". Without creating a sincere environment of the transaction, none can survive everlastingly. On the other hand, the correlative laws should be laid down and put into effect by the government to ensure a benign trading environment of the marketplace. Only in this way can we protect our benefit from being damaged.
