这周开始练作文，虽然为时已晚，但本人不怕苦，还望各路好汉可以从立意、句法、语法、词汇替换等角度指点迷津！是98年的大作文，贴图：
①In the vivid picture, a hen standing on her nest-box is holding a high-sounding promise that her eggs are all round with eggshells, egg whites as well as yolk.② Nearby there exists a poem that directly discloses the unhealthy ways and customs throughout the society at present—— empty promise.
①How does it concretely manifests？②As the comic reflects, promising the quality of commodities is the basic duty of manufacturers instead of depending on extra supervision of external.③ Whereas, to chase fame and fortune, vicious merchants still not merely utilize gorgeous advertisements to sell inferior products but provide the goods that they practically can not do to make a profit.④ How annoyed it is!
①Therefore, people from all walks of life should settle the chronic problem shoulder to shoulder. ②On one hand, manufacturers must hold themselves liable for what they produce.③ As an old saying puts it,” Honesty is the best policy”.④Without creating a sincere environment of the transaction, none can survive everlastingly.⑤ On the other hand, the correlative laws should be laid down and put into effect by the government toensure a benign trading environment of the market. ⑥Only in this way can we protect our benefitfrom being damaged.
①In the vivid picture, a hen standing on her nest-box is holding a high-sounding promise that her eggs are all round with eggshells, egg whites as well as yolk.② Nearby there exists a poem that directly discloses the unhealthy ways and customs throughout the society at present—— empty promise.
①How does it concretely manifests？②As the comic reflects, promising the quality of commodities is the basic duty of manufacturers instead of depending on extra supervision of external.③ Whereas, to chase fame and fortune, vicious merchants still not merely utilize gorgeous advertisements to sell inferior products but provide the goods that they practically can not do to make a profit.④ How annoyed it is!
①Therefore, people from all walks of life should settle the chronic problem shoulder to shoulder. ②On one hand, manufacturers must hold themselves liable for what they produce.③ As an old saying puts it,” Honesty is the best policy”.④Without creating a sincere environment of the transaction, none can survive everlastingly.⑤ On the other hand, the correlative laws should be laid down and put into effect by the government toensure a benign trading environment of the market. ⑥Only in this way can we protect our benefitfrom being damaged.
