明天我们要上英语的公开课。老师让我们准备一篇关于“childhood”的小短文（很短的那种=0=）
我自己写了。但是我怕有错误……
所以，能不能帮我修改一下呢？
My childhood memory
Childhood just like a garden that filled with beautiful flowers. And every thing are fantastic. Even now, I still remember one thing that were very interesting. One day,Iwent to my aunt's home with my mother. It was a long way to get there by bus.When i got on the bus,Isat down near a window. After a while,stop reporting arouse my cuiosity. I asked my mum what was the sound in the bus and why could it talk.My mum said that just a electronic stop reporting systems. Of course I couldn't understand.But mum didn't say anymore.So I gussed and than told my mum about my idea."There must be a very beautiful woman who also has a beautifu vioce,"I said,"and she are sitting on the top of the bus so she can see the things in front of us,then she tell us the next stop.Right?"I looked at my mum,she just simile and nodded.I thought that she was agreed with me!"ha!How clever I am!"At that moment ,some people in the bus were laughing.I didn't know why and I thought maybe they also agreed with me.Now seems,my idea was very foolish.But it still a beautiful flower in my garden.
我自己写了。但是我怕有错误……
所以，能不能帮我修改一下呢？
My childhood memory
Childhood just like a garden that filled with beautiful flowers. And every thing are fantastic. Even now, I still remember one thing that were very interesting. One day,Iwent to my aunt's home with my mother. It was a long way to get there by bus.When i got on the bus,Isat down near a window. After a while,stop reporting arouse my cuiosity. I asked my mum what was the sound in the bus and why could it talk.My mum said that just a electronic stop reporting systems. Of course I couldn't understand.But mum didn't say anymore.So I gussed and than told my mum about my idea."There must be a very beautiful woman who also has a beautifu vioce,"I said,"and she are sitting on the top of the bus so she can see the things in front of us,then she tell us the next stop.Right?"I looked at my mum,she just simile and nodded.I thought that she was agreed with me!"ha!How clever I am!"At that moment ,some people in the bus were laughing.I didn't know why and I thought maybe they also agreed with me.Now seems,my idea was very foolish.But it still a beautiful flower in my garden.
