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                                   中  秋

                           每到这个时候
                           就想你雌性的芬芳
                           馥郁温柔的丰满
                           温暖我冻裂的期盼
                           每到这个时候
                           市场上昂贵的不是月饼
                           一种意谓着团圆的祝愿
                           价格不断上扬的是红豆
                           一种原色的相思与渴望


                           人生犹如海上的舢舨
                           只因缺了没有水的海岸
                           所以我们无从泊港
                           为与你有下次的际遇
                           我不得不选择离别
                           孤独漂泊自己的舢舨
                           永恒流浪
                           朝载晨曦晚渡星光
                           诗人从此
                           收获扼腕的叹息
                           离别是残缺的美
                           团圆是美的残缺

                           每到这个时候
                           人们都去看月亮
                           说是欣赏
                           这个时候月亮好圆
                           秋之寒夜里
                           月亮还会残缺
                           我这残缺不堪的诗篇
                           能不能一如从前
                           填满
                           你中秋圆月里
                           残缺的空白


                                            原创:绿叶常青青



1楼2008-08-31 01:14回复
    语言再凝练些,会是一首好诗


    2楼2008-08-31 21:02
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      团圆的节日里,每个人却有不同的感慨!


      IP属地:辽宁3楼2008-08-31 22:56
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        预祝博友们中秋节快乐,身体健康,事业有成,合家幸福,万事如意


        4楼2008-09-06 19:23
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          祝博友们中秋节快


          5楼2008-09-11 02:48
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            中秋节到了,借楼主的诗祝选吧里的每一个人快乐


            IP属地:辽宁6楼2008-09-11 19:22
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              2008中秋同乐


              7楼2008-09-13 14:29
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