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明天的简短自我介绍，希望大神给予修改和建议

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Hello!everyone .my name is Zheng Li Yan I am from ShangRao. l am feel very luck have this choice to introduct myself .l am a positive girl.l like to smile and like to do some activities outdoors .l hope we will play together in before long.l also hope to make best friends with everbaby here.And spending full and pretty life in the next three years. Thank you.

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来自Android客户端1楼2015-09-21 21:36回复

第三句I feel very lucky having this chance to introduce myself

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第六句把everybaby改成everybody

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choice换成chance or opportunity

来自iPhone客户端4楼2015-09-21 22:54

hello，everybody .my name is zly and I come from sr.it's my pleasure to be allowed to introduce myself here.I think I'm a positive girl who u

来自WindowsPhone客户端5楼2015-09-21 22:57

used to doing exercise outside.also I'm very friendly so that we can get alone very well in a short time.finally,I believe I'll spend a very

来自WindowsPhone客户端6楼2015-09-21 22:58

meaningful three years with you guys.yeah,that's all.thank you你可以按这个格式写，好久没接触英语课本了，有错你自己改改

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