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请求修改这句话 某初中英语老师说这没问题

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compared with high paying entertainment industry ,their salary can not be justified. They say that what they are cotributing to the society can be clearly seen while the function of entertaining industry has been nothing but merely amusing people.
Workmen produce products provided for our daily use, doctors develop new drugs used to deal with various diseases and prolong our lifespan,and scientists scope for new science and technology to make our lives more colorful and convenient , They seldom benefit from those " stars " objectively,they say.


1楼2015-05-25 09:17回复
    谁写的?


    IP属地:中国香港2楼2015-05-25 11:41
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      2026-03-17 02:13:09
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      没有问题修改个啥????


      3楼2015-05-25 11:44
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        语法没问题啊。。


        4楼2015-05-26 10:00
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          第一句的their 指的是谁?


          来自Android客户端5楼2015-05-26 18:26
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            第一句对比对象就有问题。复习博弈论了剩下懒得看了


            IP属地:美国来自iPhone客户端6楼2015-05-26 19:48
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              楼主贬过了中学教师,又贬小学教师。咋回事?


              来自Android客户端7楼2015-05-26 20:01
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