麻烦各位大神帮我看一下，我这篇英语文章如何，是为考四级做准备的。
下面是题目内容：
下面是我写的，大家看看，有没有啥毛病啊：
The jade is one of the popular jewel all the word,specifically in Southeast Asia.In China the jade develop 5000 years history since paleoith times.The reason why jade is metaphorically virtueis that its flintiness,beauty,durable.According to the jade's durable,pretty color,reputed protectiveness and prevent tried,the jade is treasure.The medal whoes Beijing Olympic Games 2008 is adopt"gold inlaid with jade"form,it possess China characteristic.
下面是题目内容：
下面是我写的，大家看看，有没有啥毛病啊：
The jade is one of the popular jewel all the word,specifically in Southeast Asia.In China the jade develop 5000 years history since paleoith times.The reason why jade is metaphorically virtueis that its flintiness,beauty,durable.According to the jade's durable,pretty color,reputed protectiveness and prevent tried,the jade is treasure.The medal whoes Beijing Olympic Games 2008 is adopt"gold inlaid with jade"form,it possess China characteristic.
