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现代生活中,许多人认为现在的工作压力比以前大了 。这文章几分

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Nowadays,increasing number of people crowed into cities for seeking some chances of earning money while sprawling over the whole country.All that led to some people’s feeling that pressure of working has grown and the rhythm of life become faster than ever before.To be honest,this opinion I agree with partly.
It’s no doubt that this phenomenon exactly existed in a great mount of places,especially in some coastal cities like shanghai,guangzhou,shenzhen and so forth.Several factors accounted for this situation.At first,more labor have poured into hugely important cities gave rise to intensify fierce competition in working position,which broke down balance in labor market.The employers who didn’t worry about a employee’s leaving will affect the efficient of his own company can prolong staff’s working time according to his own thought and needs randomly.From a statistic of job seeker in several cities,at least three to five people competed a job averagely.Furthermore,a new research has shown that a lot of local governments haven’t made laws relating to limiting labor’s working time and protecting people’s rights of resting,that aggravated this phenomenon.
Therefore,as we say in previous chapter,this only existed in several eastern megalopolis.In most of suburban area and western cities,we can hardly find the same situation.In contrast,we have seen almost people in countries playing card or surfing Internet at home when they were free during the period of slack reason while the people in the cities would go out for singing in KTV or drinking coffee in Star Buck.Almost everyone has spare time to do what he or she desired to.


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没有结尾啊,4.5-5喽而且很多时态啊句子结构的小问题啊


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还有就是雅思写作非常formal,不能有简写的,会产生歧义


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连续几天看了你好几篇,但问题还是类似,与其这样,还不如好好修改一篇。比如中文句式直接移到英文,语法直接错了。还有单词也是按照中文字面来的。
建议淘宝几十一篇找人好好改改,光这里问分数没用


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