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As the development of modern science and technology 评分如何

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Nowadays,we find more and more modern technology have been invented was applied in many fields,such as industry,service,farming and so forth.The booming of technology have given rise to transformation of people’s valuable conscious that some man held the view that traditional culture will eventually die out and new technology will dominate this world.To be honest,this opinion I don’t agree with entirely.
There is no doubt that modern society was captured by technology.3D printer,Internet,automatic electric have been introduced to daily life have profoundly accelerated the process of the world which have brought a lot of convenience and profit to us.More importantly,the working of modern society has depended on high technology completely.For instance,Serbia have lost Kosovo war in 1999 because its urban and suburban facilities were destroyed by allied army which caused the paralysis of the whole nation,so finally they had to surrender to the allied forces.
However,with the development of modern technology,traditional culture and technology would not diminish in the future.Now,we find an exciting phenomenon a great mount of books and paper related to national history and myth have become increasingly popular among youth.Furthermore,a lot of historical and cultural museums have been built attracted more citizens included of every age group.More interestingly,inhabitants in metropolis have been inclined to buy a product by hand rather than made in industrial companies,especially for snack or handcraft,and the reason for why they choose was in memory of special flavor in traditional period.


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观点和结构还行 语法错误不少 用词不是很地道


2026-01-28 20:33:30
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时态有点乱


  • slate_gray
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第一句就不对。。


  • 回忆都淡了o
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楼主用模板了吧


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真累赘,罗唆


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请问第一句和第二句有关系吗?


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The booming of technology have given rise to transformation of people’s valuable conscious that some man held the view that traditional culture will eventually die out and new technology will dominate this world.这句话,你仔细看看逻辑多么混乱。


2026-01-28 20:27:30
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has given rise to


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希望表述显得客观。少用人称。你不是专家,你的话不太具有说服力。要用事实,和数据说话。


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