In 2012, I graduated from college, School of software engineering. In August, I went toapply for a game company, what surprised me is I should succeed, I am very happy, so I made a decision. I must work hard, in order to more beautiful life.
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In 2012, I graduated from my college, the School of software engineering. In August, I went to apply for a game. What surprised me is I succeed. I am very happy, so I made a decision. I must work hard, in order to have a more beautiful life.
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时态不一致。如果你用过去时。那个what surprised me was I succeeded. I was very happy so......觉得0.0那个succeeded 换成got it 会更口语一点
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