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2007年 考研作文 觉得写得很烂……求给批改下

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马上考研了……觉得自己作文一直没什么起色,请大家给修改下。立志写好作文,他日如能学成,必当回来,一起造福这里。
As is vividly depicted in thepicture, two football players is playing a match. The man on the right consideredthe goal keeper is as big as an elephant, which covered the whole Goal. Whilethe man on the left keeps a huge one that it is easy and inevitable for a goal.Apparently, both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them.
The aim of the portrayal is to illustratethat self-confidence plays a vital role in our life. The man lacking confidencewill do nothing successfully and tends to easily give up their challenges forthe reason that it is beyond their ability to cope with it. A reasonable excuseat first sight, but when weighing in mind, it is obvious that it is the lackingof confidence rather than the lacking of ability which leads to the undesirable result. The fact that self-confidencealways plays a key role to one`s pursuit of success. But it is really hard forus to overcome this difficulty-the lack of confidence. But once you defeat it,you will find everything will change. Take the example of Yaomin who is atalented basketball player who enjoyed an excellent reputation of the mostskilled and gifted Asian player, really benefited from the confidence. When heplayed his first game in NBA, he just got an OK statistics. But he was notupset, he made effort, struggled for the training, and endured the hostilityfrom others. By the time he returned to the court next season, he gave apowerful response to the man who had looked him down. He said, it is confidencethat supported him to make these achievements.
In my view, confidence as an essentialquality can be shaped established and acquired, just believe in yourself and spareno effort to pursuit your dream. You will be successful soon. Justdo it.


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