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之前翻译的太烂了,现在英文好了些重新翻译了一遍
翻译速度也变快了,争取一天两节翻译一整集吧
有些语法小错误大家忽略就好。。
一楼若是被吞就送给度娘好了。。


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    As I pull the trigger, a flare blasting outfrom the rifle’s muzzle. The husky sound of gun fire spread out in the silentnight. The rifle shaken in my arms with a warm empty shell popped out. I cansee from the aiming that “Jesus” neck splashed out some spurting blood, and hishead pushed by the bullet to his shoulder. His body sways, then fell to theground.
    With my gun fire as the assault order, eachsquad leader gives their orders. The supporting squad shoots first with theirautomatic rifle, then covering squad throws flag grenade and smoke bomb intothe crowd. After the explosion, the assaulting squad divided into groups withdifferent direction as they attack. The attacking squad is wearing infrarednight vision, so they find their target easily in the smoke. The sound of “MP5”3 shoots in burst follow by drug dealers’ screaming keep coming out from thesmoke. Under this special tactic attack, the drug dealers have no way to fightback. Their pistol shooting sound gets fewer, and I know they are about to befinished in a few seconds.
    I skip from the falling wall we used as abunker, I lead my team sprint to the dock.
    There are not much drug dealers left. Mostof them are huddling up in a warehouse. I sprint to the entrance of thewarehouse and nod to “Mouse”. “Mouse” shout out, “Apple!’
    Flag grenades are threw into the ware houseone by one. Follow the explosion, we go through the dust by jumping through thewindow or breaking through the door, kill everything that are moving inside thewarehouse.
    The last drug dealer has been killed by ateam member who wears black city suit with a perfect horizontal strafe.
    Gun fire sound disappear, where only left thesound of moaning.
    “Alpha squad report, target eliminated. Nocasualty.”
    “Beta squad report, target eliminated. Nocasualty.”
    “Gamma squad report, target eliminated. Nocasualty.”
    “Delta squad report, target eliminated. Nocasualty.”
    “Epsilon squad report, target eliminated.No casualty.”
    Stepping on the ground that full ofconcrete bits to the dock, I can see that my brothers are following my order.They are checking the drugs, make sure the bodies are fully dead, if not, theyuse their knives cut the throats. This is what the gangster should do.
    “How much?” I ask one of the brothers whois checking the drugs, “white or ice?”
    “B..Boss, it is number 4 white. About 500kilograms...”
    That is way too much! 500 kilogram! 30 or40 is already a big number. “Jesus”? He could not have the money even if hesells himself. Is he only a middleman? If he is, who’s behind this?
    My thought has been interrupted by amassive explosion. I look over, the place we parked our vehicles has becomenothing but fire. As I am looking, the two brothers beside me have already beenshot, the blood splash on my face.
    “Shit!” I fight back and sprint to thenearest warehouse. Then I look through the window to see what is happening.
    It is chaos on the dock. There are bulletsand concrete bits fly everywhere. My brothers are dying. I can hear the soundof grenade launcher with “M4A1”. How come? Why is it happening like this? Inthis city, no gangster could have such equipments, not even the police.
    Suddenly, we change from the ambusher to agroup being ambushed.
    “Boss, we are surrounded!” “Mouse” voicecome out from the microphone, “it is an army, Marine Corps! We cannot fightback under their grenade launchers!”
    Are you kidding me? I am here to kill thedrug dealer, not robbing the armory. Suddenly, I understand everything. My bossshould know that the government is using armies against me, but the bitch didn’ttell me when I tell him my plan of tonight! The deal is just a bait for me toeat. They use about half ton of drug to bait me out, how lovely.
    “Everyone listen, divide into groups andbreak out from multiple directions!” I shout to the microphone. I know mybrothers are good, but we cannot fight with the army with only 40 people.
    “Boss, we only have left about half of us.”
    “Mouse” comes to me with other 2 brothers, “Boss!There is no way to break out, there are so many of them, they are everywhere!”
    “Do you regret?” I look at their face withblood, and said something they cannot understand, “Do you regret to come withme?”
    “Boss! What are you saying?”
    “We never felt regret!”
    “Even if I die today, I will not regret!”
    “Don’t call me boss.”
    I look into their eyes, and listen to thegun fire getting close to us. I said, slowly, “My real identity is anundercover cop, a lieutenant. A tool that government use to kill. I am not yourboss, my name is Si Chen.”
    I can see their eyes full of surprise. “Mouse”shaken his head, said, “Boss, I don’t care who you are. You is you, nothingmore. We will never betray you.” The other two brothers don’t know what to say,but they agree with “Mouse”.
    “Really?” I smiled bitterly, “Look outside.They will not let me go, they are here to kill me.”
    “Why is that? Aren’t you one of them?”
    “Nothing to be surprised about. I know toomuch, so they want me died.”
    “Boss, you give the order! We are already adead man.”
    “Okay! Lets fight back!” Even if I diedtoday, I will die like a real man. I look back in the warehouse, “Go to thebackdoor!”
    Only a few steps we have taken, a smallcylinder liked object appears in my sight threw in from outside.
    Flash bomb! This word has just come to mymind, concentrated gun fire and dazzling white light comes to us. My legs feelhot, then I lose my balance and fall to the ground. As I struggled to fightback, few more bullets hit my right arm that I cannot hold my rifle. A smallsized bullet even tears my back.
    I see two soldier stand right beside me asmy sight become normal. “Mouse” and the other two brothers lie on the groundwith their body falling apart.
    After the soldier kicked my rifle away, afamiliar person walks to me. That is right, it is my boss.
    “Si Chen, I cannot imagine I have to killyou by myself.”
    “Yes, sir. Me too. Am I making you worriedtoo much?” I can feel my life is fading away with the wound on my back.
    “You have done too much, it is time for youto retire.” My Boss’s mouth is moving, “Everything you left will be take careby new people.”
    “So you are saying it is my fault?”
    “Don’t blame me, your identity is beingsuspected. It is you who don’t act in low profile. You can kill thosegangsters, but when you kill those government officers, I cannot help you. Ihave to kill you to protect me.”
    “You son of a bitch! That was all yourorders!”
    “I know, no one will know after you died.”
    “Sir!” A soldier takes a quickstep to here,“Mission complete, all target eliminated. We have about 50 casualties.”
    “Si Chen, what can I say. You are really a genius.These are punks not troops.” My boss seems surprised, “So it is worse it tokill you in this way.”
    “Worse it? Not for me.” I shake my head,and I can find a cold object on my belt. I push the button on that object,said, “If it adds you in, that will worse it.”
    My boss have a ridicule look on his face. Iraised my left hand with that object. Ah, it is too heavy. A 25 centimeter inlength, 3 centimeter in diameter silver white cylinder. The red light flashrapidly ...
    “Air bomb!”
    “Fall back!”
    “That is FAE! Fall back!”
    “Kill him!”
    “There is no time!”
    A massive explosion followed by a dumbsound of explosion. Fire rampant in a 150 meter radius area. Even people awayfrom few kilometers can feel the ground shaken strongly ...
    “Hi everyone, our station has just receivea breaking news. Last night, the ruin of number 6 dock in our city has beenhaving a gun fight between drug dealers and the Marine Corps. Thousands of bulletshad been used. Until every drug dealer are killed, there are many casualties inour army, especially the last drug dealer explode a massive bomb. In the explosion,33 people are died including 5 government officers. Now you can see the centerof explosion on the screen...”


    3楼2014-08-29 07:11
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      IP属地:湖北来自Android客户端4楼2014-08-29 08:01
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        好多地方的空格怎么都被吞了- -不给力啊


        5楼2014-08-29 08:16
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          精品的节奏,求问已经英化到多少了


          IP属地:黑龙江来自Android客户端6楼2014-08-29 08:19
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            貌似我很早以前就看到开英译的帖了……是楼主吗……


            IP属地:福建来自手机贴吧7楼2014-08-29 09:44
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              有错误请指出啊,语法还是硬伤。。英体教。。


              8楼2014-08-29 09:53
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                膝盖献上


                IP属地:黑龙江来自Android客户端9楼2014-08-29 19:54
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                  IP属地:甘肃10楼2014-08-29 22:09
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                    哭瞎,英语真是我的生死大敌啊


                    IP属地:贵州来自手机贴吧11楼2014-08-29 22:23
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                      上次写完了各种人喷翻译得不好,这次大家都这么捧场好不习惯啊,哈哈哈


                      来自手机贴吧12楼2014-08-30 00:12
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                        Ch.3
                        What happened to me ... My thought is a massaround in my head. I want to touch my head, but I feel nothing. Where... Whereis my body? Is that saying ... is that saying I am died!?
                        Yes, that is right... I was with my brotherdoing our job, and then we fall into trap. The next thing happened was ...fighting ... explosion ... okay, so that’s it. I am really died...
                        Shit! What the fuck!!!
                        Wait, calm down... calm down... just calmdown... I am died, but I am still thinking. Yes, that’s right, I am thinking. Iam thinking which means I still exist...
                        Shit... even I am thinking... what am Inow? No human body but still thinking ... am I a ghost? I am a ghost!?
                        Oh, come on! I was still having fun withthat world... I don’t want to be a ghost... I have many brothers, properties...
                        I cannot feel my brothers when I thinkabout them. These things are out of my knowledge...
                        I don’t know how much time I have spent inthis space. However, I have found out how I can live in this space. First ofall, I am surviving as a piece of energy. I don’t have organs and body. All Igot is a piece of energy combine by many free energies.
                        I have a special ability to detect what ishappening outside my “body”. This sense can help me dodge from danger in thisspace. What I found out is that there are many other subjects like me existingand some of them are really powerful.
                        I cannot get close to the powerful ones,but I to those are weaker than me... I will eat them!...
                        I will make them as part of my “body” justlike eating. Do you think that I am cold-blooded? Well, what could I done?
                        In this damn place, there are so many otherpowerful ones exist, and many power charges that come from nowhere... If I amnot careful enough, I would gone disappear... I feel so despaired...
                        Finally, one day... wait.. there is no timein this space. I am saying it so you can understand.
                        Finally one day, when I find a piece ofenergy that I can eat, the hugest power charge since I got here hit me... I wasbounced out of here... shit, I am not a rocket...
                        Next, I feel my “body” slightly shaken, itfeels like that I was break into a elastic bubble. When I finally slowing downand stopped, I know I am in another space. A space that is safe, I am not surehow I can feel this, but I really did. Touching....
                        “Weak life, what are you thinking?” astrong, clear voice commit into my mind.
                        “None of your business, leave me alone.” Iam still touching, cannot react at this time.
                        “You are in my ‘body’. If you areuncomfortable with it, I can send you out.”
                        “Wait a moment!” My mind recovered fromtouching, “Are you talking to me?”
                        “Well, seriously this is not talking. Weare using our mind to communicate; however, you can think this is talking inyour way.”
                        “Really? What...What kind of thing... areyou?”
                        “Same as you, in your way, I am a life too.”
                        “In my way? What do you mean in my way? Howdo you know what is ‘my way’?”
                        “When you entered my body, I review allyour memories.”
                        “You are a thief!”
                        “I don’t have that word in my mind. Everylife should share their memories to face potential dangers in the future.”
                        “That is my privacy! Why don’t you givesome of your memories?”
                        “You cannot afford it with such low energy.”
                        “I don’t care...”
                        ...
                        In our dialogue, I understand that we areat the space near to the edge of our universe. And this huge life appears whenthe universe appears. It is suitable to call her large because there are fourplanets that are the same size as she is. She knows the universe more than Ido. I am like a idiot to her. Well, there are something she doesn’t know. Forexample... I know how to act shamelessly than she do ...
                        In a short of time, we become friends. Sheknows everything about me, and I know little about her. Because of her size, Inamed her “Cotton”. However, she doesn’t want to call me “youzhejianrenshengminglihebuquyizhidequanyuzhouwudishashenchumomisixiaomeimeibuchangmingdedashuaigexunlang”...the reason is that it is too long to remember...
                        “Hey, little one. What are you thinkingabout?” You see, she would like to call me like that.
                        “I am thinking about my past 24 years oflife.” My voice sounds sentiment.
                        “24 years, what I have left in my life?”
                        “Are you still want to get back to thatlife?”
                        “It is not like that. It is just too muchregret.” I remembered my brother’s faces.
                        “There is nothing you can do about it. Theyare your past.”
                        “If I have a chance to do it again. If Ican do it again, I will do better...” My voice is fading away.
                        “Really? Is that what you want? What if theonly thing left in your life is pain?”
                        “I will change my fate! Why I have to leavein other people’s life not controlling my own destiny!”
                        “Are you sure about this? No regret?”
                        “What can I done? I can only think aboutit.” I thought, “there is nothing I can do.”
                        “If you fulfill my requirement, I will giveyou this chance.”
                        “You are kidding me! It is not funny!”
                        “I know a place that satisfies your needs.”Cotton said, “but here is my condition.”
                        “Why aren’t you say it earlier! I want togo there!” I really had enough of this life.
                        “Don’t worry, it will just take a fewminutes.” Cotton really learns my skills, “Don’t you want to hear what is mycondition?”
                        “Whatever, I can do 10 of yourconditions...” I cannot hold my feelings, “lol”
                        “My condition is, don’t call me Cottonagain!”
                        “No problem, No problem. That’s it? Lol, noproblem.”
                        “I will first send you there, I will tellyou other things once we get there.”
                        “Alright, why don’t you say this earlier.”
                        “Cause I just find out that you are annoying...”
                        “oh, really? I should annoy you more,lol...”
                        “By the way, what is my new name?”
                        “If you don’t want that name... what about “CottonCandy”?”
                        “Shut up!”
                        ...
                        “Roll yourself!”
                        Accompany with Cotton Candy’s voice, mybody stars to shake again...
                        Alright, let’s go and start a new life!


                        13楼2014-08-30 08:09
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                          Ch.4
                          I stopped.
                          Although I cannot see the surroundingpicture, I can feel many familiar feelings keep passing to me. Ah, this is thesoftness of the wind, this is the coolness of the rain... So many differentfeelings, my tears would drop if I have body.
                          “Little one, you are here.” This is Cotton... Candy’s voice.
                          “Now... What should I do?” I feel soexcited and confused...
                          “There are few lives near you moving toyou, can you feel it?”
                          “Yes, there 6... wait, what happens to thatlife? It is strange... I can see 1 but it feels like 2 of them.”
                          “It is nothing strange, it is a baby in herbody. She will be your mother.”
                          “You ... you are saying I am reincarnating?”
                          “Yes, don’t worry. It is safe.”
                          “Why don’t you find a matured body for me?Why a baby?”
                          “No, it will kill the other one’s spirit. Youdon’t expect that, don’t you?”
                          “Whatever, your are the boss. Now tell mewhat to do.”
                          “Another thing you need to know, when youget into the life, you cannot merge with him immediately.”
                          “What? Cotton Candy. You are kidding me. Notthe Matured ones, not even the young ones? Playing around with me, huh?”
                          “You are right now a energy formed object,and you eat those other energy in the space. That small and weak body cannotafford your energy. Well, there is also other problems.”
                          “Can you tell me everything at once?”
                          “I will condense you to a smaller energyand put you into where the life thinks. When this body could afford your power,you will wake up. Of course, I will take one piece of your body to let youcontrol the body. You can learn everything in this world that is unfamiliar toyou. However, this piece of you would change throughout learning, so thefrequency would change. You will be woke up by special events that wouldtrigger same frequency you and the life have.”
                          “Is that it? Anything you need to mention?”
                          “No, not now. You have to take a reallylong sleep. Your memories will not be remembered until you wake up. Are youready?”
                          “Okay, you can do it now.”
                          “Sure.”
                          “Wait, Cotton Candy... can I keep thememories about you?”
                          “If you insist.”
                          “Cotton Candy...”
                          “What?”
                          “Thank you...”
                          “You are welcome.”
                          “Cotton Candy...”
                          “What are you trying to say?”
                          “Think about your size, don’t you need tothink about diet?”
                          “Shut your mouth up, it has begins.”
                          ...
                          Half year later...
                          In the City of Dark Moon, in the governor’smansion, everyone is busy, their expression on their face is a combination ofhappiness and worries. Why? It is because that the governor’s wife is about togive birth to a new baby! It is the governor’s third child; however, it hasbeen a whole night, that little one still stays in his mother’s belly doesn’twant to come out. Among the others who are worrying about the mother and thebaby, Visel Kata is the most worried person.
                          Visel Kata governor, who is the onlygovernor who rule the City of Dark Moon as a civilian cadre throughout thehistory, is walking in the garden outside the bedroom. The person he love the mostin his life is suffering and moaning that makes him feel the same.
                          A soldier-liked tall man stands beside him,said, “Brother, don’t worry. It is the Saint from the capital who is helping.Catelyn should be fine.” It is Visel Kata’s sworn brother, Tenaxi.
                          “I know that, but Catelyn is ...”
                          “Don’t worry, have faith in her.” Asorcerer in long robe said, “If the Saint cannot do it. I will do it myself.” Itis Visel Kata’s another sworn brother, the Great Sorcerer Weibo.
                          Visel Kata is going to say something more,however, interrupted by the maid runs out of the room.
                          “Governor, the Madam gave birth to herchild! It is a boy!”
                          When Visel Kata is going to have someexcitement appear on his face, the other maid carries more information.
                          “Governor, the boy is not crying!”
                          “Governor, the boy is laughing, and...”
                          Visel Kata cannot take the suffering, heruns to the bedroom.
                          The first thing come to his sight is a paleface with bright eyes, clear eye brows, beautiful nose with a small mouth underit, this is his lovely wife, Catelyn Haig. Catelyn is looking at his son in herarm with love and focus. That little one is moving his arms and feet dancing,with laughing sound in his mouth.
                          Catelyn smiled to his husband as he iswalking towards her, the smile melt Visel Kata’s worry like the sunlight inspring.
                          “Come here, my dear. Look at our son.”
                          “Catelyn, I hope that you are fine... Themaid says our son cannot cry?..”
                          “Who says a child must cry when they wereborn? Maybe our son is genius!”
                          “But... but his two brothers were cryingwhen they were born, weren’t they?”
                          “Leke and Sifta? I don’t know, do you notlike our son?”
                          “Who said that, he is our son how can I notlike him? Do not worry, I will love his just like I did to his brothers.”
                          “Visel Kata.” The Saint who is washing herhands said, “there is a thing with your child.”
                          Visel Kata just finds out that there isanother person in this room. The Saint from the Capital Sorcerer Association,Belltina.
                          “I am sorry, I didn’t see you. Thank you,Saint Belltina, and what is the thing you are talking about?”
                          “This child is a bit strange. I cannot feelany magic power in his body.”
                          “Really? Why is that?”
                          “I am not sure, but don’t worry about it.Maybe is that he is too young to be detected.”
                          “Sure; however, thank you for everythingyou did for this child and the mother.” As Visel Kata says, he salutes toBelltina.
                          “No worries, aren’t we friends?” Belltinasmiles with her hand covering her mouse, “Catelyn is my lovely sister. By theway, what is his name?”
                          “Coin Kata, I would like to call him CoinKata. Is that good? Catelyn?”
                          “Coin, Coin. I like this name.” Catelynsays to the child in her arm with happiness, “Little naughty boy, I will callyou Coin Kata from today. You have to be a good child, listen to every wordyour mother says.”
                          The child is laughing happier...
                          [... Holy Calendar June, 2215. Disaster ofthe God Tribe, the source of chaos, the center of evil, and the man who carryGod’s blood on his hands, Coin Kata, born in the City of Dark Moon ...}
                          ------<God Confidential Historical Record, Page 2>


                          14楼2014-08-30 08:13
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                            咦?什么时候成精品了。。之前团子说我翻译完第一集才给精品


                            15楼2014-08-30 08:32
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                              IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端16楼2014-08-30 18:16
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