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@碎梦之秋

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TEAM TWO

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Team Two
<Jessica>
What the...
I can't stand it anymore. Who does the magicians think they are!?Always toying with us...
This time, I promise myself, I Would let them see. I am not weak.
As the monsters came insight, I seriously regretted what I said.
There was three gigantic, horrible monsters. Tall and lethal, the could wipe out a whole army of people.
They stood as tall as the trees, and they seemed fixed on us.
This could be intresting... way to die.
After a few seconds, something wierd happened. Two of the monsters blurred out of sight, leaving one dragon like monster fixated on me and Charles. A mark appeared on the dragon's forehead. It was our mark, the mark of me and Charles. No way. This dragon cannot be friendly in any way. It was very... red. It seemed like a very angry dragon dipped into some strawberry sauce.
I tried to step forward, maybe this dragon is our gift, a weapon that we can use. A Alive weapon. This is it!

I skipped happily forward, keeping a two metre range between me and the dragon, and said hesitantly,
“Are you sent by the magicians to help us?”I made some sign language, and even forced an 'easy' smile.
It only gave me one reply.
“GROWL!!” The sound shook the ground.
“BAD DRAGON! BAD!”I ran, and pulled out my sword-a one meter long, wicked sword that can easily cut you in half.
Charles was trying to cut off its wings with no luck. His whip did no visual harm, but it did make it madder.
Charles whip is two meter long, it is as flexible as leather, but it is as harmful as iron. This wing must be very very hard.
The dragon clawed against the ground, trying to decide which one of us is tastier.
“Jess, its not on our team. DONT hesitateto kill it! The mark is just to confuse you!”Charles shouted at me.
I shook my head to make my mind clearer.

The dragon pawed and attacked Charles. It missed, and he whipped against its claw, making it whimper for just a moment, then it healed itself instantly.
I charged, pointing my sword into a point in the middle of two scales. Just at it entered the meat of the dragon, it sizzled, the meat burned up, and when the flames died, it was healed.
Strange magic, but it is very easy for the magicians.
It raised its tail and swung it at me. I jumped up and its claw came up. I raised my sword, but the impact was strong enough that I fell painfully back onto its tail.
Charles came running towards me, and it raised its razor sharp teeth.
“careful.” My voice was still very weak, but Charles heard me. He made an deadly arc with his whip, and its teeth fell off, right infront of me.
I picked it up.

ME SO 酷炫。

顶贴

He made an deadly arc with his whip, and its teeth fell off, it dropped onto the muddy floor and the floor sizzled, the poison on its teeth became less, and soon grew back again.
I picked it up. I examined it carefully, and I stood up shakily, holding the teeth in my hand, I picked up my fallen sword and took the teeth's hollow end.
I gained my strengh, and forced the teeth into the sword's sharp tip.
Beautiful.
The sword and teeth joined into one, one powerful force that can slay through anything in my way.
I felt my strength slowly come back, I ran out of the dragon's range.
I gained my footing, and saw Charles making an atempt make the dragon open its mouth again.
I held my sword with the teeth stuck on it, and grabbed hold of its tail.
As the tail swung wildly to shake me off, I took advantage of the swing motion, I flew myself onto the dragon's back.
I ran cross to its neck.
God, please work.
Can you hear me, Hermes?

I held my sword-teeth high. I closed my eyes, and imagined myself in slow motion, the low magicians that are watching this must be very excited.
I used all my strength into its neck.
All the poison spured out into the dragon's neck. Blue blood flowed out, the dragon fell onto the floor.
Dust flew, and when the dust settled, I raised my sword into the sky, and yelled:
I AM JESSICA!! AND I AM HERE TO SAY - THE TOP MAGICIANS WILL NEVER CONTROLL US!!! WE WILL OVERPOWER THEM!
I panted, and rolled off from the dragon's neck, and closed my eyes relenctedly, WHAT HAVE I DONE!?
Yes, I finally did it. I offended the magicians.

@碎梦之秋

nice job christine!!

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