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1楼2007-12-16 09:03回复
    第一篇:一大清早。。。。粉兔叫道“蓝儿,绿兔下来吃早餐了,快下来!”“恩,妈妈我来。。。啊呀”蓝兔摔到在楼梯上绿兔看着蓝兔无耐地摇摇头说“哎,蓝兔,你长着么大了从幼儿院起你每天下楼时能不能不摔到啊?剧我统记你每天要摔123次啊。”“呜~对不起”说着蓝兔被绿兔抱了起来,20分钟后,“妈妈,爸爸我门去上学了88”蓝兔乖巧地说“恩路上小心,别再摔。。。。”妈吗只听门外咚地一声“不用说蓝儿又摔到了,哎~这孩子” 第一篇上完


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      4楼2007-12-16 09:46
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        5楼2007-12-16 11:28
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          谢谢


          6楼2007-12-16 20:42
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            7楼2007-12-16 20:50
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              虹猫早以等在蓝兔家门口了,看见蓝兔摔到说“哎呀,大小姐呀您能否一天不摔到?如过你有那么一天我带你去审请迪尼斯记录哈!”“虹猫!”蓝兔不满地叫到。“啊!快迟到了快走把”“啊。你等等我,哎呀。。。”当他门赶到学校的时后发现铃声一响。他门一每秒1000000000米的速度向教室跑去。忽然蓝兔跑的太快没注意脚下的东西。“啊” 2分钟后她睁开眼睛“恩。。。。”发现她躺在一个英俊的男生怀里“啊,她惊慌地起来对那个男生说“对,对不起,我一不小心我要走了”那个男生早以被蓝兔的美貌吸引住了当他醒来时她早以不见了可是他怎么也忘不了蓝兔


              8楼2007-12-16 20:59
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                “同学门静静,我门班来了位新同学他叫黑小虎”兰老师对一群“讥讥渣渣的马雀兵”说。黑小虎一眼就认出了蓝兔,“老师我能坐那个女生旁吗”黑小虎说,“哦,那。。那好把小玲你让一下位子”“谢谢”黑小虎来到蓝兔旁微笑地说“我叫黑小虎你好”“恩,呵呵你好我是蓝兔”蓝兔温柔地答到。 “啊对了同学们我门学校要选大队委,我想让欣欣。晴晴。蓝兔去选你门看学谁?”“蓝兔”全班500分被的喊。。。“额,好了别喊了那就昂蓝兔去是是把 下课”老师一没秒300米向楼下冲次[因为她知道这个班人的嗓子真是一个比一个好]

                下一篇请等待


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                  10楼2007-12-21 13:12
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                    11楼2007-12-21 13:13
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                      莎丽“蓝兔,恭喜你啊,大队委啊,可是个不小的职位呢,真羡慕你呀”“呵呵,没什么。”蓝兔害羞的笑笑“哎,我说虹猫,你怎么不高兴?”紫兔从后先拍拍虹猫的肩膀叫到“啊呀,我说是谁啊?原来是个紫巴婆呀!我有什么可高兴的?又不是我当选了大队委?”虹猫先是装惊吓然后慢慢挥复平静。。“哎,蓝兔可是你lp啊你也不为她高兴?哎可怜的蓝兔啊!~~~~~~~~~~~”“紫兔!”蓝兔和虹猫一起喊到。“哎呦”莎丽和紫兔一起怪叫到。“哎,我说你们俩。。。。。”虹猫和紫兔打闹了一路,“蓝兔同学,老师叫你去”黑小虎拦着她[他]门说,“哦,那我先去一下你门先回教室把”“哦那你快回来啊”虹猫说,“哎呀”紫兔怪里怪气地说 “干吗?快回教室把!”“哎虹猫别推我啊。。。。。。。。。” 

                      我一定要完成任无 黑小虎心里苦笑的说 他到第有什么任无请关注下集“危现,蓝兔!”


                      12楼2007-12-21 20:02
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                        黑小虎回想到昨天父王找他谈话 “爸爸我来了,您找我有什么事”“哦,虎儿我要向你说1件事,你门班是不是有个叫蓝兔的女孩?”“哦,是啊她怎么了?”“我要你把她抓过来!”“啊?为什么?”“因为,她的爸爸...{话外音:先省去回来会慢满知道的]”“是爸爸,我会的”黑小虎不忍心的回答“小虎难为你了”“不爸爸,我一定会把事做好”“恩” 黑小虎从回想中回来了 看着蓝兔单纯的眼光在心里说蓝兔对不起!“蓝兔!”“恩?”“来,把这个吃了!”“啊,那。。那是什么”“对不起蓝兔!我只能这样了!”蓝兔惊慌的往后跑还没跑几步“啊”她摔到在地上眼看黑小虎快追来,她想站起来可是她的膝盖摔伤了怎么也站不起来只见黑小虎跑过来捂着蓝兔的嘴把她带到没人的地方,呜呜蓝兔害怕极了,蓝兔被迫吃了小药丸不到3分钟就昏到了,黑小虎抱起蓝兔想把她带走。可。。。。。。 请看下集“王子救公主”


                        13楼2007-12-21 20:38
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                          顶顶顶顶顶顶顶顶顶,不过楼主,给你提一个小小的建议:以后描写人物动作,神态都要放在第一位啊


                          14楼2007-12-21 22:05
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                            恩谢谢你


                            15楼2007-12-22 11:43
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                              17楼2007-12-22 13:12
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