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各位大哥大姐，帮我看一下我这篇文错在哪里．帮我指出来随便教我怎

　　　　　　　　　　　National holiday
Hi,ZhangPeng!I'm Malin.I'm think invite you go to a trip.OK?

I have a hoiday plan .Frist,we are going have a picnic in the

park.Than,we are going visited zoo and do our homework.And we

have dinner and we are going to the cinema watching a fim.How

about? I think you should readt some food of the picnic and you

should ready your homework .约定出发的时间和见面地点（这句我不会，请帮帮忙，随便翻译下．）
请帮帮忙，万分感谢！

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1楼2007-10-07 14:16回复

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2楼2007-10-07 14:20

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3楼2007-10-07 14:38

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4楼2007-10-07 14:38

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5楼2007-10-07 14:39

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　　　　　　　　　　　National holiday
Hi,ZhangPeng!I'm Malin.I'd like to invite you to go on a trip,ok?
I have a holiday plan .Frist,we are going to have a picnic in the park.Then,we are going to visit the zoo and do our homework.And we will have dinner and we are going to the cinema to watch a fim.What do you think of my plan? I think you should have some food in the picnic and you should get ready for your homework .

6楼2007-10-07 14:44

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