回复：TVD【口语】节选日记里的小段子 练口语

楼主，帮我点评看看

我觉得好渣。。求指导

亲爱的们 楼楼第一天发的
【smile】一定不要和【smell】搞混 发语音的亲们有一半都会读成另外一个
这两个音其实挺好区分的

嗯嗯，，，楼楼口语好好。。。

克劳斯的口音好好听。。。有什么区别么？

Dear friend,today is the fifth day since we broken down.Do you know how much I have been missing you.I do not want to argue who is wrong,I just want to tell you I am really concerned with you.If you still love me,come back,don't leave me alone.Although you just a friend,I don't wanna to take apart with you.