【在梵高的星空下】有懂英语的亲进来一下,有事请教.

有懂英语的亲进来一下,有事请教.
能不能帮我女儿看一下这篇短文写得是否正确:I have a cat,her name is pipi.pipi is very cliver.her is white.I like her,and her like me to.PiPi from chinese,I very like chinese.and I have a dog.his name is PiuPiu.PiuPiu and PiPi is good firend.

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I have a cat,her name is pipi.pipi is very clever.she is white.I like her,and she likes me too.pipi from china,I like china very much,and I have a dog,his name is PiuPiu.PiuPiu and pipi are good friends
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我孩子才开此学英语,可我是个英语盲,有谁能帮看一下,谢谢.

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I have a cat.Her name is Pipi. Pipi is very clever.She is white.I like her,and she likes me too.Pipi is from China. I like China very much.And I have a dog.His name is Piupiu.Piupiu and Pipi are good friends.

原文：I have a cat,her name is pipi.pipi is very cliver.her is white.I like her,and her like me to.PiPi from chinese,I very like chinese.and I have a dog.his name is PiuPiu.PiuPiu and PiPi is good firend.

更正后：I have a cat. Her name is Pipi. Pipi is very clever. She is white. I like her and she likes me too. Pipi is from China. I like China very much. And I have a dog. His name is Piupiu. Piupiu and Pipi are good friends.