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哎呀高二生的几篇英语作文求大神帮找语法错误= =

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...轻喷= =平时多靠语感现在感觉不看语法不行了.....


1楼2013-08-07 22:30回复
    这篇是课本有讲英式英语和美式英语的区别就引用几个例子写了一篇...
    Everybody know that both American and British speak English.But actually there are many differences between American English and British English.For example,it is called as "movie" in America while English call it as "film",which is used to watchfor fun as we know.
    Another fact is,by comparing the differences in different kinds of English,we can get many interesting information.For example,American always short word "colour" as "color",or short "programme" as "program",it just show that American is more casually than British,which is surely in our mind.
    So,when you feel boring in learning English,just try to find out the "interesting differences" in English,you will get success.


    2楼2013-08-07 22:30
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      2026-01-30 00:54:18
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      第二篇是高考作文题 内容就是介绍英语的学习经验
      Hello everyone,I'm Li Hua.I just got the first prize in the English compation that held by our school a little bit eariler,so I would like to share my way about learning English with you.First,join English Corner or other organization,you can rise your spoken English by this way slightly.And then,you should hold to write English daily as long as you can.When you do that,you get progress.Another suggesstion is,try to enter the website "EnjoyReading" when you are free.After all,we learn English is to understand English,so just do that.
      Finally,of course you have to work hard,or you must be lose.


      3楼2013-08-07 22:31
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        第三篇也是高考题,假设自己是四川学生,写写在汶川地震三年来的感受(写到后面都有角色代入感了...
        Three years ago,when the earthquake took place,everything was broken.Our school was broken,and our hearts were broken,either.But in three years,there are many great changes.We have a new school now,and our hearts are also stronger than before---just like our new school building.
        Time can change everything.Thanks to the soilders,they made us alive.Thanks to the workers,they built a better city for us.And thanks to the god,he made everyone stronger.
        There are nothing more diffcult than fight for live and get out alive from the death room.After the earthquake,I became much harder.In the past three years,I work hard for nothing but just my dead present.And now,sitting in here,I'm trying to change my life again.


        4楼2013-08-07 22:31
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          这是多么活色生香的短文改错标准版格式啊~~


          5楼2013-08-07 22:38
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            in three years 这么用有问题,


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              楼主码字是码了多久


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