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【同人】Born to Die(架空现代,瑜小乔)

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1楼献给马里奥·普佐.大师已经不在,大师已在天堂.
故事情节改编自Lana Del Rey的MV "Born to Die",所以1楼也感谢带来这支经典MV的Lana.


1楼2012-11-21 13:09回复
    Feet don't fail me now
    Take me to the finish line
    All my heart, it breaks every step that I take
    But I'm hoping that the gates
    They'll tell me that you're mine
    Walking through the city streets
    Is it by mistake or design?
    I feel so alone on a Friday night
    Can you make it feel like home, if I tell you you're mine
    It's like I told you honey
    Don't make me sad, don't make me cry
    Sometimes love is not enough when the road gets tough
    and I don't know why
    Keep making me laugh
    Let's go get high
    The road is long, we carry on
    Try to have fun in the meantime
    Come and take a walk on the wild side
    Let me kiss you hard in the pouring rain
    You like your girls insane
    Choose your last words
    This is the last time
    Cause you and I, we were born to die
    Lost but now I am found
    I can see but once I was blind
    I was so confused as a little child
    Tried to take what I could get
    Scared that I couldn't find
    All the answers, honey
    Don't make me sad, don't make me cry
    Sometimes love is not enough when the road gets tough
    and I don't know why
    Keep making me laugh
    Let's go get high
    The road is long, we carry on
    Try to have fun in the meantime
    Come and take a walk on the wild side
    Let me kiss you hard in the pouring rain
    You like your girls insane
    Choose your last words
    This is the last time
    Cause you and I, we were born to die
    Come and take a walk on the wild side
    Let me kiss you hard in the pouring rain
    You like your girls insane
    Don't make me sad, don't make me cry
    Sometimes love is not enough when the road gets tough
    and I don't know why
    Keep making me laugh
    Let's go get high
    The road is long, we carry on
    Try to have fun in the meantime
    Choose your last words
    This is the last time
    Cause you and I, we were born to die


    5楼2012-11-21 13:14
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      2025-11-25 15:19:57
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      总觉得你写的东西哲学思考意味很浓啊,先占个沙发吃完饭来看^_^


      IP属地:广东6楼2012-11-21 13:17
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        向死而生,好美的感觉,看到题目就戳进来了……可是,我能弱弱地说我没看懂么?虽然这里的周郎真的好美好虐……【捂脸逃走】


        IP属地:陕西8楼2012-11-21 13:55
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          虽然只是篇短篇,但是有许多细节描写非常打动我,并且LZ隐藏在文中的某些观点很耐人寻味。一次远行,长长的公路,年轻漂亮的情侣,向着未知的前方一路飞奔,在终点处等待他们却是悬崖。
          也许他们早已知道这个结局,也许他们没有预料到旅途的终点会嘎然而止。有如我们每个人的命运般,前方是什么其实根本无须猜测,因为只要走下去,结局总是殊途同归。
          早一点,晚一点,旁边坐着谁,谁又下了车,最终,路总有尽头......
          不好意思,罗罗嗦嗦了这么一通,仅代表个人看法,也许LZ想表达的并非如此,但是到我眼里就变成了这么灰色的看法。一样文,百人看,每个人看到的都不一样吧。
          最后感谢此文给我带来的一点感慨。


          IP属地:广东9楼2012-11-21 14:59
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            周瑜是黑道中人吧,godfather,“公司里的同事”,抹脖子什么的……
            两个人都带着美好的面具,面具下有很脏的灰尘,但是灰尘擦了,又是琉璃一样纯洁美好的爱。
            不知道我这样的理解有没有错?
            看这文好像是看cult片一样,插了很多倒叙有点意识流,好像看懂了又好像看懂,就算没看懂,也有那么些情节停留在脑海,比如那个亲爱的,亲爱的。


            IP属地:广东10楼2012-11-21 17:18
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              最近BG好像有复燃趋势><不错不错><『喂!


              IP属地:湖北来自手机贴吧11楼2012-11-21 18:38
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                一直没办法加载上音乐,虽然我不怎么想放这支MV的视频,不过...


                13楼2012-11-21 19:28
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                  楼主可以告诉我周瑜到底是什么职业吗?文很耐人寻味呐…


                  IP属地:湖北来自手机贴吧14楼2012-11-21 23:10
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                    你果然还是写出来了啊……
                    比我想象中更好,亲爱的。而且我觉得名字可以不用叫“born to die”了,而是“born to die together”。


                    15楼2012-11-23 21:49
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                      =。=万年潜水党Lana粉来顶一个写的很好喔~什么时候再写一篇Ride?


                      IP属地:广东16楼2012-11-24 22:00
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                        美文把我从水底炸出来了TUT……很微妙暧昧的灰色调好棒!!情节性不强但是很有画面感而且细节刻画好精致!!TUT同BG党,拜倒求抱大腿~~


                        来自手机贴吧17楼2012-11-24 22:27
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                          有人躺枪了


                          来自手机贴吧20楼2012-11-29 17:54
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